David Kavanagh Poet Tetractys

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That Kiss

That Kiss


Touch
Caress
Golden dress
Sweet nothings past
Lips falling silent, heartbeats violent

Surrender assail, tiny breaths impale
Pheromones ooze 
Mouths desire 
Passion 
Fused


Double Tetractys 8 Poetry Contest
Picture 1
How many syllables 1/2/3/4/10/10/4/3/2/1
Sponsored by: Eve Roper 
27/08/2021

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Sam Kauffman September 14, 2021 at 12:14 PM Very steamy but well written David. Congratulations for you win. David Kavanagh September 14, 2021 at 1:18 PM Thank you Sam, I was probably moving in on the gal more quickly than the photo portrays, but hey I enjoyed their moment, cheers David

Eve Roper September 9, 2021 at 6:37 PM David, congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for writing a verse for the contest. Hugs Eve David Kavanagh September 10, 2021 at 12:58 AM Thank you Eve, I appreciate the placement, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu August 29, 2021 at 11:59 AM Hello David Kavangh, I feelthe romance in this poem. I also like the antique car in the photo. Cheers! Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu August 29, 2021 at 3:26 PM Hello David Kavangh, I love the classic cars. I like the early 20's 30's & 40's. to me all these years I mentioned are the best cars ever. Cheers! Darlene. David Kavanagh August 29, 2021 at 1:43 PM Heya Darlene, the picture is a fantastic prompt for the contest, it seems to exude romance of vintage times, thank you for checking in cheers David

Kim Rodrigues August 27, 2021 at 2:00 PM Passion with violent heartbeats and sweet nothings! Very nice! David Kavanagh August 27, 2021 at 3:09 PM Thank you Kim, Oh you know that first kiss, can seal the deal, getting lost in the moment, cheers David

Sotto Poet August 27, 2021 at 1:02 PM David, thank you for your nice words. You wrote an excellent poem with magnificent connotations that were expertly weaved into your poem, making it the greatest for a win. David Kavanagh August 27, 2021 at 1:30 PM Thank you Lasaad, the picture itself has an intimate innocence, so just followed its lead, I'm needing prompts lately, so trying out some of the contests to keep focused, cheers David