That Kiss

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That Kiss Touch Caress Golden dress Sweet nothings past Lips falling silent, heartbeats violent Surrender assail, tiny breaths impale Pheromones ooze Mouths desire Passion Fused Double Tetractys 8 Poetry Contest Picture 1 How many syllables 1/2/3/4/10/10/4/3/2/1 Sponsored by: Eve Roper 27/08/2021

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/14/2021 12:14:00 PM

Very steamy but well written David. Congratulations for you win.

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/14/2021 1:18:00 PM

Thank you Sam, I was probably moving in on the gal more quickly than the photo portrays, but hey I enjoyed their moment, cheers David

Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2021 6:37:00 PM

David, congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for writing a verse for the contest. Hugs Eve

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/10/2021 12:58:00 AM

Thank you Eve, I appreciate the placement, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/29/2021 11:59:00 AM

Hello David Kavangh, I feelthe romance in this poem. I also like the antique car in the photo. Cheers! Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/29/2021 3:26:00 PM

Hello David Kavangh, I love the classic cars. I like the early 20's 30's & 40's. to me all these years I mentioned are the best cars ever. Cheers! Darlene.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/29/2021 1:43:00 PM

Heya Darlene, the picture is a fantastic prompt for the contest, it seems to exude romance of vintage times, thank you for checking in cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/27/2021 2:00:00 PM

Passion with violent heartbeats and sweet nothings! Very nice!

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/27/2021 3:09:00 PM

Thank you Kim, Oh you know that first kiss, can seal the deal, getting lost in the moment, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/27/2021 1:02:00 PM

David, thank you for your nice words. You wrote an excellent poem with magnificent connotations that were expertly weaved into your poem, making it the greatest for a win.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/27/2021 1:30:00 PM

Thank you Lasaad, the picture itself has an intimate innocence, so just followed its lead, I'm needing prompts lately, so trying out some of the contests to keep focused, cheers David