That Hurt

Stepped on a cheerio Heard a Crunch! Slipped off a treadmill Seemed like a punch! Saw Mr. Alligator Munch his Lunch! Hit my head in the elevator OUCH !

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/1/2023 3:58:00 PM

Funny, clever, a winner. Congratulations! Brian

Ray Zottola
Date: 7/4/2023 1:36:00 PM

Ty Brian. I stepped on a cheerio! ??

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/9/2023 11:34:00 AM

Hi Ray ,hope things going well for you..TS a great idea to be grateful, each day we are alive. Panagiota

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/23/2023 4:48:00 PM

Hot here Ray. 100. My daughter h just got back from Phoenix, where it was 117 each day, Grandson was in a baseball-tournament of 50 teams. She was so.glad to get back home! Hey Ray, glad you are still kicking. Your poem was super cool.I was just wring a kyruc myself. Mine is too long, Summertimes wishes. Pangie

Ray Zottola
Date: 7/23/2023 3:08:00 PM

Yo Panagiota, Hows things? Just a note to wave hello, im still kicking.

David Fisher

Date: 5/2/2023 4:54:00 PM

Ray, lol and well said indeed!

Ray Zottola
Date: 5/2/2023 5:43:00 PM

TY DAVID. sometime i remind myself to appreciate the good things more. Best to you! Z