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That First October Day

That first October day The sky was no longer grey The birds were still singing, never did they fly away It was the day that I first met you, Your handsome smile took my breath away And I knew that in that moment that Everything was going to be okay That first October day I felt that I was on cloud nine The moment that I saw you, I'd knew that you would be forever mine That first October day I had a tingle all through my spine The day was so beautiful, so full of sunshine That first October day I felt you kiss me so passionately Held me so tight in your arms Feeling safe and protected; away from harm That first October day It was love at first sight And I made a promise to myself That I would forever love you Every single morning, noon and night

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Skat A

Date: 5/7/2016 12:59:00 PM

karla, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 3:36:00 AM

Karla, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Karla Deal
Date: 12/25/2013 9:19:00 AM

Well, thank you Linda :) And MERRY CHRISTMAS to you. It's been a long while since I've posted a poem and to be honest with you, I've had a bit of writer's block. I tend to get that from time-to-time. It's hard to come up with a great poem sometimes, but I hope I can get back in the swing of things and start writing again as I love writing poems. By the way...I'm ENGAGED!!!! I'm so VERY, VERY HAPPY!!!