Karla Deal Poet Rhyme

That First October Day

That first October day
The sky was no longer grey
The birds were still singing, never did they fly away
It was the day that I first met you,
Your handsome smile took my breath away
And I knew that in that moment that 
Everything was going to be okay

That first October day
I felt that I was on cloud nine
The moment that I saw you,
I'd knew that you would be forever mine

That first October day
I had a tingle all through my spine
The day was so beautiful, so full of sunshine

That first October day
I felt you kiss me so passionately
Held me so tight in your arms
Feeling safe and protected; away from harm

That first October day
It was love at first sight
And I made a promise to myself 
That I would forever love you
Every single morning, noon and night

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Skat A May 7, 2016 at 12:59 PM karla, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A December 24, 2013 at 3:36 AM Karla, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer Karla Deal December 25, 2013 at 9:19 AM Well, thank you Linda :) And MERRY CHRISTMAS to you. It's been a long while since I've posted a poem and to be honest with you, I've had a bit of writer's block. I tend to get that from time-to-time. It's hard to come up with a great poem sometimes, but I hope I can get back in the swing of things and start writing again as I love writing poems. By the way...I'm ENGAGED!!!! I'm so VERY, VERY HAPPY!!!