That Day

Winking sun through downpour trails
Earth foraging lives
Blackened standards show respect
In our sullen retreat
memories start to fade
The forgotten scar the forgetful
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wodarz Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 6:40 PM
What a wonderful poem, Christopher! This has great imagery; it makes me think of all the times I've looked back towards past memories and relived them in my mind. -Paulina
Quigley Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 11:24 AM
Thank you
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