That Child Within

  
"When you carry your inner child with you, you carry the joy but also the hurt. " Quote by _Constance
The essence of me, is my inner child trauma; the hurt deep buried though I did have love, but always, always drama. That child within me feels unprotected at times, and now the adult me writes sadness in my rhymes; oh, I still feel frightened sometimes, and see the child me- praying to the Lord above ! I see the child me, playing with my dolls in the dark; whispering, Lord, I want cookies and tea, 'cause mommy has gone berserk. Lord can you call grandma- she will know what to do, and then gran was there making me laugh with peekaboo; I never forgot as I grew the child within me alone in the dark and my fear and plea ! _____________________ September 3, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/That Child Within Copyright Protected, ID 09-1386-467-03 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Your Inner Child sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judged 09/13/2021 Second Place
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Agustin Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 7:40 PM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this... so earnest; making me have a look at your childhood. God bless you.
La France Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 5:43 AM
Beata, thank you for the congrats and for the comment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Alex Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 7:25 PM
"That child within me feels unprotected at times, and now the adult me writes sadness in my rhymes;" Beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 5:43 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 12:38 PM
This is brilliant, Constance. I love it! Beautifully done. Congrats on your top win and God bless you, Love, Gina
La France Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 1:00 PM
Gina, thanks for the compliment and for the congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Seeker Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 9:23 AM
A traumatic childhood indeed, yet you have demonstrated that transcendence is within reach, God bless, congrats on your win, Constance
La France Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 1:02 PM
Seeker, thanks for the congrats and comment, yes I had a lot of trauma in my childhood as you have probably noticed in my poetry, I write my pain ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations, Constance. Very touching.
La France Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Subimal, thank you for the congratulations and the comment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Jayasankar Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 2:17 AM
Oh... so emotional and sad... and I also read your reply to one of the comments....almost made me cry... but at the same time am happy you survived all such situations in your journey in life with so much courage and positivity and I really really APPRECIATE you my friend from the bottom of my heart... Best wishes and hugs...~ Ani
La France Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 3:20 PM
Ani, thank you for the compliment on my poem and me and for your compassion ~ love and serenity _Constance
Horne Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 7:53 AM
beautiful but so sad - love this, my friend. hope you & Snuggles are doing well x
La France Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Jack, thank you for the compliment, sadly this really did happen, it was after my sister died in childhood and my mother just could not take care of me, she told me to play on the floor and she was laying on the bed and the room got dark, I was hungry and crawled under the bed and whispered to the Lord, to bring my grandma, and he did ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Hankins Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 3:04 PM
I like your poem, Constance, but I feel so sad that you had to go through all of that trauma. You have come so far. Beautiful writing style.
La France Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 7:46 AM
Milt, thank you for the compliment, yes, it has been a long, long journey to here but I am a survivor and have come to a spiritual place in my life and can look at the sadness of my journey with poetic eyes, and are we poets not blessed that we can write the pain ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Achara Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 2:14 PM
I very much like this poem. Many of us have experienced childhood trauma, and recovery takes a lot of time.
La France Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 2:19 PM
Chetta, thank you so much for the compliment and comment ~ friendship and harmony _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 1:50 PM
That is why childhood trauma is a travesty. Hugs…
La France Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 2:19 PM
Kim, me too, but there were times of great love also ~ love and serenity _Constance
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