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That Big Question

She pondered that big question. What was life to her now? Is she? on the road to past repeating walking towards psychotic beating Is she? stumbling down completely untreated crawling alongside udder defeated She answered that big question. This is her life now! She is pivot point paths fowardly creeping deflating reasoning beyond just healing She is wired inside electrical feeling ending timed cycles in holy completing

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Niall Fulham

Date: 5/19/2017 9:29:00 AM

Hi Holly , I hope she learned to stay away from takers and stick with the givers of life , beautiful write Holly :))hugs

Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/23/2017 10:22:00 AM

Indeed...your logic is impeccable... very nice

Holly Bohto
Date: 3/23/2017 10:44:00 PM

Thank you. Pashang.

Chris Green

Date: 3/23/2017 7:22:00 AM

very creative and imaginative Holly. It sure is nice to see you writing again.

Holly Bohto
Date: 3/23/2017 8:01:00 AM

Thanks Chris. After I wrote this, I told myself this is absolute crap. lol. Us artists and our vacillating perceptions of our own work.