Thanx In Advance

When u forgive and forget
And just remember good days
When u ignore sunset
And only watch its lovely rays

When u asked ur heart to hate
And yet u never do
When u can always wait
In desert  a lovely dew

When u got hurt too much
But trying to go through
When u miss your lover's touch
But he became cold as snow

When u able to be kind
Even to who are so cruel
When they thought you are blind
and for them acting like a fool

Keep going ,emprace your heart
Be proud of your unique soul
No matter who choose to apart
or who decide to end his role

cheaters like autumn leaves
So simply let them fall
 Remember that your own griefs
Had been always their goal

    Yes you are the one
Who gives others new chance
But when they are gone
Simply say : thanx in advance !
                            Faten makram

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Date: 10/5/2015 5:11:00 PM
Hello Faten, this is original and deep. This is my warm welcome to you, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Faten Ishak
Date: 10/6/2015 12:01:00 AM
I want to ask how can i uplead my photo Thanx
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Faten Ishak
Date: 10/5/2015 11:13:00 PM
Thanx a lot linda for your nice feedback about my poem , am happy u like it ,am really lucky to have u as nice poet and reader too , you made my day , i love to read ur work too , , kisses Faten makram ishak
Date: 10/5/2015 3:25:00 AM
- A friendly welcome with your first great poem here on Poetry Soup - Hope there will be many ... many more in the future :) - I wish you good luck, Faten :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Faten Ishak
Date: 10/5/2015 3:35:00 AM
Thanx a lot Anne for your friendly welcome , it is so sweet to have nice lovely friends here like you & skat Have a lovely morning :)
Date: 10/3/2015 11:53:00 PM
Fatten,Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Faten Ishak
Date: 10/4/2015 12:26:00 AM
How to edit replies here , i put 3 hearts , i found it 3 questionmarks
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Faten Ishak
Date: 10/4/2015 12:24:00 AM
Hello skat , am really happy with your warm welcoming , my name is faten makram am oral surgeon 35 y from egypt , it is my first time to join poetry soup but am already poet member in other sites , i participated in international contests & i won 3 times taking second and third place & 25 dollars in each time ,,but 4 us the readers lovely words and comments are our true profit , i got 30,000 reader that made my day everytime i saw their comments or existance , am honoured to have u as my newest soup friend here , , u made my day with ur sweet words & i hope u can give me ur opinion about my poems & i will be happy to read ur nice poems too ???
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