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Thanx In Advance

When u forgive and forget And just remember good days When u ignore sunset And only watch its lovely rays When u asked ur heart to hate And yet u never do When u can always wait In desert a lovely dew When u got hurt too much But trying to go through When u miss your lover's touch But he became cold as snow When u able to be kind Even to who are so cruel When they thought you are blind and for them acting like a fool Keep going ,emprace your heart Be proud of your unique soul No matter who choose to apart or who decide to end his role cheaters like autumn leaves So simply let them fall Remember that your own griefs Had been always their goal Yes you are the one Who gives others new chance But when they are gone Simply say : thanx in advance ! Faten makram

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Date: 10/5/2015 5:11:00 PM
Hello Faten, this is original and deep. This is my warm welcome to you, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Faten Ishak
Date: 10/6/2015 12:01:00 AM
I want to ask how can i uplead my photo Thanx
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Faten Ishak
Date: 10/5/2015 11:13:00 PM
Thanx a lot linda for your nice feedback about my poem , am happy u like it ,am really lucky to have u as nice poet and reader too , you made my day , i love to read ur work too , , kisses Faten makram ishak
Date: 10/5/2015 3:25:00 AM
- A friendly welcome with your first great poem here on Poetry Soup - Hope there will be many ... many more in the future :) - I wish you good luck, Faten :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Faten Ishak
Date: 10/5/2015 3:35:00 AM
Thanx a lot Anne for your friendly welcome , it is so sweet to have nice lovely friends here like you & skat Have a lovely morning :)
Date: 10/3/2015 11:53:00 PM
Fatten,Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Faten Ishak
Date: 10/4/2015 12:26:00 AM
How to edit replies here , i put 3 hearts , i found it 3 questionmarks
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Faten Ishak
Date: 10/4/2015 12:24:00 AM
Hello skat , am really happy with your warm welcoming , my name is faten makram am oral surgeon 35 y from egypt , it is my first time to join poetry soup but am already poet member in other sites , i participated in international contests & i won 3 times taking second and third place & 25 dollars in each time ,,but 4 us the readers lovely words and comments are our true profit , i got 30,000 reader that made my day everytime i saw their comments or existance , am honoured to have u as my newest soup friend here , , u made my day with ur sweet words & i hope u can give me ur opinion about my poems & i will be happy to read ur nice poems too ???

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