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Thanksgiving Day/Dane Ann

The wind is quite blustery on our short walk to grandmaws Hankering to have some chocolate pie and dressing And see the new baby boy! Never get to spend much time with the family lately Kiss 'em all and get a hug Stress out over all the germs we shared GOD grant us blessings all the days of our lives IF the heartburn doesn't kill me tonight, praise Jesus Value of family --priceless$$ If brother can hobble he will make it ok Next year will be better God grant brother a new hip by Christmas Drop off some new teeth for granny Ann, she needs to chew her food good You're faithful and just to grant our needs!

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Date: 11/7/2010 9:09:00 AM
loving the twist in the ending, doris! great play of charming words.. wishing you and i luck in the contest! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/4/2010 5:03:00 PM
A great idea for Dane's contest, an Acrostic, Doris. Sounds just like a typical family! Smile. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/4/2010 10:02:00 AM
A nice way to remember Thanksgiving. It left me with a comforting picture of togetherness at grandma's house. I enjoyed the read, good luck in the contest. Caryl
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Date: 11/4/2010 7:28:00 AM
"Pricele$$" is a great way to describe this outstanding acrostic, Doris. Got some laughs reading it and the poem also brought back memories. Lord, please let granny get the teeth and brother his new hip!! Wowie, my friend, this is the best entry I've read for Dane Ann's contest and your talent will take you to the top. Crystal ball tells all! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/4/2010 6:56:00 AM
Very unusual positive thoughts on the Thanksgiving day, Doris
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