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Thanksgiving Day

Think of how it could have been how you made it through my friend all the heart ache that was shared never alone as your burdens they bared know that everytime you faltered someone was kneeling at an altar giving love the best way they knew in constant prayer all while you grew vain were there attempts to keep you down insecurities as we looked all around nearer my God to thee was your prayer give him your love and he'll always be there Day in and day out be thou my guide and shelter me from my own pride you will be my God forever by my side

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/28/2010 9:26:00 PM

Thanks for a lovely thanksgiving acrostic, you did it well and wrote a terrific poem even without the form :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/24/2010 12:05:00 PM

A Happy Thanksgiving Day to you. I am on my way to work and it is storming today. I was out to shovel twice and will have to go out again. Took Al to work and two cars hit the ditch and two were already in the ditch. I basically crawled at a snails pace and now have to go out and drive to work. YUCK. Will email later. Love Phyl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/22/2010 4:55:00 PM

Hon, she is still in your heart and will remain there. But if she can bring you even closer to God, maybe that is His intended mission for April. I'm sorry I haven't been online much. Haven't been well, but you have been on my mind. With the losses you endured this year, I know Christmas will be a struggle. Just remember how many of us love you and are pulling for you, okay? You're always in my prayers. Love, Carolyn

Derrick Burton

Date: 11/22/2010 10:38:00 AM

A beautiful piece of poetry here and I really enjoyed reading it today. Have a pleasant day and happy holidays.

Maya Kaabour

Date: 11/22/2010 10:29:00 AM

I'm Muslim and I celebrate Thanksgiving with family friends. It truly is a wonderful sight to see everyone gathered together celebrating one of the most essential feelings of all- gratitude. God bless, John :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/21/2010 1:07:00 PM

Wonderful words John for your Thanksgiving Day Acrostic poem.. good luck if u enter it in Dane Ann's contest .. the sentiments and emotion are very poignant and touching luv.. enjoy a Happy Sunday and a Happy Thanksgiving too..luv..

Diane Christian

Date: 11/21/2010 1:02:00 PM

aww a beautiful poem and so true very very true, thanks for your kind coments on my poetry, ohh music to my ears theese words, how the Lord guided me and protected me from harm whata blesing is that, God bless you from diane

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/21/2010 8:55:00 AM

Very nice write on the Thanksgiving day, john, with nice ending you will be my God forever by my side

John Freeman

Date: 11/21/2010 7:17:00 AM

Yes John it is quite amazing these studies they are doing on matter/antimatter. Once they realize that all they are doing is proving the existence of God/Love, then we can get on with love in action, which is life! Smile! "Day in and day out be thou my guide and shelter me from my own pride." This is the key to, "Staying nearer my God to thee." Agape, Moses

Joy Wellington

Date: 11/21/2010 7:01:00 AM

John, a poem of trust, faith, encouragement and hope. Happy Thanksgiving sir. Blessings, Joy (Jew)

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 11/21/2010 6:19:00 AM

Thnx John for reading my work , "HE is ever welcome...". Yeah ! not much familiar about American nitty gritty of celebrations per se.... but small tiffs is common everywhere.... Highlighting same may spoil the better part..... Anyway thnx..... Best Luck for "Thanksgiving day" entry for contest... Luv/Best wishes....Hitendra mehta

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/21/2010 5:04:00 AM

the whole point of the poem is in the first line.

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/21/2010 4:21:00 AM

John, a beautiful write on faith, I love your ending of your Acrostic.. Thanks for the laughter with your comment earlier ;)

L'Nass Shango

Date: 11/20/2010 7:47:00 PM

I will walk with your faith as a guide any day. We can trust he is always there ... all the best in the contest with this poem (if you do enter it).