Afolabi Muideen Poet Quintain (English)

Thanks Giving

Days swim pass as fish swims, human forget
They are once fish______life in ocean
That finally came to dirt
What is as helpful as does the moon?
Moon is god, a glorification


19/6/2015
Contest:  five lines/ metaphor and simile
Sponsor by Sara Kendrick

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Andrea Dietrich June 28, 2015 at 2:30 PM hey,I enjoyed reading this. "Good luck in the contest, Afolobi

Constance La France June 21, 2015 at 7:56 AM Afol, oh I see you are presenting us with a contradiction, some believe God created humans in his image, therefore we were never fish, however if you believe the scientist then we were fish. Very thought provoking, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, song bird Afolabi Muideen June 21, 2015 at 2:43 PM Not only human but all life began in ocean. Afolabi Muideen June 21, 2015 at 2:21 PM Yes BW we are never a fish, I heard this story that in the beginning human are living in ocean and this is true, you can search fro it on internet. My write here is not that Human is fish but human is like fish then, thanks for take your time to comment on my poem.

Oluwatomiwo Akinyemi June 21, 2015 at 6:09 AM nice poem. thanks for visiting my page.

Austin Eseke June 20, 2015 at 3:28 AM GREAT JOB! keep it up...and keep the flag flying..

Alexis Y. June 20, 2015 at 1:39 AM You said a lot in these five lines. Great job! Good luck in the contest:) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux June 20, 2015 at 12:47 AM Well expressed, good luck in the contest.