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Thanks For Sharing

you cough away
sweetly serving
whooping cough soup



Written Jan 27, 2019                     Contest: Any Theme Than-Bauk 
                                                   Sponsor: Charles Messina

2nd grade3rd grade4ththan-bauk

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Jan Allison

February 13, 2019 at 3:52 PM

many congrats on your win Caren ... thanks for sharing lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

February 13, 2019 at 6:59 PM

Thank you Jan.

Alexis Y.

February 11, 2019 at 11:48 AM

Hi Caren, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Caren Krutsinger

February 11, 2019 at 2:27 PM

Thank you Alexis. I was surprised to tell you the truth.

Charles Messina

February 10, 2019 at 9:27 PM

Caren, I liked this. But unfortunately the rhyme scheme was off so I had to place you at he bottom. The 3rd syllable in your 2nd line had to rhyme with the last syllable in the first line. Also the 2nd syllable in the last line had to rhyme with the 3rd syllable in the 2nd line. Sorry Thanks for entering my contest..Charlie

Caren Krutsinger

February 11, 2019 at 7:26 AM

That is okay. I tried. That is the main thing. A learning experience is never wasted.