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Thanks For Sharing

you cough away sweetly serving whooping cough soup Written Jan 27, 2019 Contest: Any Theme Than-Bauk Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/13/2019 3:52:00 PM

many congrats on your win Caren ... thanks for sharing lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/13/2019 6:59:00 PM

Thank you Jan.

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/11/2019 11:48:00 AM

Hi Caren, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/11/2019 2:27:00 PM

Thank you Alexis. I was surprised to tell you the truth.

Charles Messina

Date: 2/10/2019 9:27:00 PM

Caren, I liked this. But unfortunately the rhyme scheme was off so I had to place you at he bottom. The 3rd syllable in your 2nd line had to rhyme with the last syllable in the first line. Also the 2nd syllable in the last line had to rhyme with the 3rd syllable in the 2nd line. Sorry Thanks for entering my contest..Charlie

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/11/2019 7:26:00 AM

That is okay. I tried. That is the main thing. A learning experience is never wasted.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/28/2019 1:02:00 PM

I think I would send that soup back!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/28/2019 2:48:00 PM

Aha, but they are so tricky when they are in front of you, hiding their coughing until you take that first few bites.