Thanks For Getting In

she had an ominous feeling
when she began to climb into the green pickup
Her six children's faces flashed in her brain
She knew she was not returning home
They will be better off she thought
The man gave her a smile that chilled her
Thanks for getting in he said
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hankins Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 5:50 PM
Oh my, this gives me chills! What in the world is she thinking??? Not thinking, I reckon.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 1:05 AM
I imagine some people are almost "too" socialized.
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