Thanks For All Your Lies

All those times you told me. 
I'm yours.
Did those lies burn your lips.
Did they blister and pop.
With the sharpness of your kiss.

I watch as you walk away.
Slowly you took her hand,
Turned your head and smiled.
That smile you used to greet me with,

The knife cut me deep,
The anger started to bubble.
Slowly eating away at me.
My face change color.
My hands started to shake.
I shouted for goddess stake.

I stood daydreaming.
I run after you,
I pleaded with you I still loved you,
You waved a hand in my face and simply said goodbye.

How careless your heart as become!.
I pulled away the final blow to the heart,
My eyes turn black,
My body turned grey
You gusp, but it's to late 
the darkness replys
the demon you have released. 
she's forth to hold inside.
But with the selfless act.
You have displayed.

As sent the key to unlock and set me free.
now you must pay for what you have done.
With a swift of its hand the girl was gone.
Your delt it's now all gone.
He falls to the floor.
Oh my god what have you done.
Tears fall from he's eyes.
The demon laughs.

I wake from my daydream.
All in a blur.
They walk off happy together.
Was that really my inner thoughts. 



Written by davina browned
28/09/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/15/2016 6:15:00 PM
You right with so much emotion and such beauty..I particularly love that first stanza..."My eyes turn black, My body turned grey You gusp, but it's to late the darkness replys" also looove those lines....excellent Davina. You are divine! Keep up the writing! Always, Laura
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Date: 1/25/2016 7:37:00 PM
DAVINA, Excellent poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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