Crissa Mae Poet Sonnet

Thanking the Gardener

You stand in front of a garden so vast
You gave a smile that could shame the great sun
You went to the young roses, as you must
You water them with knowledge, like you can
The roses you see almost everyday
You truly do care for them so dearly
You tell them great stories to make their day
And you always do it wholeheartedly
One time you pick a few, we pricked your hand
It hurts so much, so we ask forgiveness
I wish it will not hurt this genuine bond
That will be destroyed by our thorned progess
I want to say a million thanks to whom
Made the beautiful roses greatly bloom

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Poet Destroyer A March 23, 2016 at 12:33 PM Glad to see this one again, Crissa, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A January 23, 2016 at 9:21 PM CRISSA:) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT~ Crissa Mae February 17, 2016 at 11:48 PM I'm an idiot. Terribly sorry! Thanks again! I'm flattered! ??crissa =) Crissa Mae February 17, 2016 at 11:35 PM Thank you! Did you feature it? ........ But thanks again!! Never thought this would happen! *crying tears of joy right now* ILOVEYOU ~Crissa~

Skat A January 16, 2016 at 4:05 PM Nice to read this one again...........SKAT

Khrysstine Zhaira December 2, 2015 at 8:45 PM Hi there, Crissa. Hope you enjoy sharing your poems here. I am also from the Philippines. -Khrysstine xx

Pandita Sietesantos November 29, 2015 at 10:57 PM Hi Crissa, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita Crissa Mae November 30, 2015 at 9:39 AM Thank you for the warm welcome and also for the compliment! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it! ~Crissa

Poet Destroyer A November 29, 2015 at 10:01 PM Hi Crissa, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Crissa Mae November 30, 2015 at 9:55 AM Thank you for the warm welcome. I am so enjoying it right now! ~Crissa

Skat A November 28, 2015 at 1:56 PM Crissa, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Crissa Mae November 30, 2015 at 9:49 AM How I wish I was right in front of you, sadly, I could only virtually hug you back *HUGS* Thanks for your greeting :) It's nice to get to know someone around ~Crissa