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Thank You Poem Dedicated To Susan

She was there for me when i needed her Quietly moving into my home Went into  hospital as an emergency Leaving my dog alone. She had the  builders to contend with Meaning bucketfuls of tea to make Jiggling times of her own work Thank you's she wouldnt take Saying thats  what friends are for, You would do it for me. Susan stayed for 4 months A big show of friendship, you must agree. How do I say Thank You To someone who has a big heart Who just took over my home How on earth do I start. The usual  flowers and chocolates Though nice, wouldn't cause a stir Then I thought I will write a poem Dedicated to her So here we are Susan This poem is for you Thank  you for being there for me Tilly says "Thank you" too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/29/2012 11:35:00 AM
A very belated congratulations in Patricia's "Thank-You" contest Seren. Love, Carol
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/29/2012 11:55:00 AM
Hey thank you Carol, never to late to leave a comment.....Seren
Date: 11/19/2012 11:53:00 AM
Seren. Congratulations with your "THANK YOU" poem,, very touching... Take care :-) ~PD
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Date: 11/19/2012 3:06:00 PM
Thanks PD I do appreciate you calling by...Seren
Date: 11/18/2012 9:53:00 AM
CONGRATS SEREN ON A MAJESTIC WRITE AND WIN LUV .. ALSO CONGRATS ON FIRST PLACE IN HUMOR ME BY FRANCINE ..NICE ..
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/19/2012 1:31:00 AM
Thank you Linda havent i been lucky ...Seren
Date: 11/18/2012 12:17:00 AM
beautifully penned piece Seren, congrats on your win
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Date: 11/18/2012 4:53:00 AM
Thank you Francine ...Seren
Date: 11/17/2012 6:27:00 PM
Simple and heart-felt poem to a friend, Seren...very inspiring!...Congratulations - Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/17/2012 9:44:00 PM
Thank you Tim.
Date: 11/17/2012 12:51:00 PM
this is a very sweet thank you to your friend. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/18/2012 4:52:00 AM
Susan only saw it yesterday, when I told her it gained 2nd place... we both had a cry...Thanks for the congrats Andrea ....Seren
Date: 11/17/2012 11:56:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/18/2012 4:53:00 AM
Thanks Debbie for your congratulations ....Seren
Date: 11/17/2012 8:31:00 AM
Beautiful words these! Friendship that comes from within is a friendship that lasts forever. Congrats on your win Seren!
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Date: 11/18/2012 4:55:00 AM
Thank you Vicky, I agree true friendship is fantastic....Seren
Date: 11/17/2012 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Patricia for the placement. I showed it to Susan and we both cried. Will make a watermark of her pic on a sheet of paper and print the poem on top.
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Date: 11/17/2012 7:42:00 AM
Big Congratulations Seren and I am sure she will love it xx
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Date: 11/18/2012 4:56:00 AM
Thanks Mandy, I am sure she will ....Seren
Date: 11/13/2012 12:08:00 AM
What a nice way to say thank you, so much better than hallmark.
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Date: 11/18/2012 4:58:00 AM
Thank you Deeana , Susan loved it...Seren
Date: 11/3/2012 5:00:00 AM
susan will be honoured i'm sure, this is a lovely poem...
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Date: 11/18/2012 4:57:00 AM
Hi Harry, Susan loved the poem, was very emotional....Seren

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