Susan Palli Poet Rhyme

Thank You, My Love

My love, my companion, my husband,
I deeply give thanks to you.
You provide my life with laughter 
And make my dreams come true.

To you I am ever so grateful,
For what you have done for me.
Together we built a foundation
For a loving family.

I thank you for being forgiving
When I often let you down.
I'm sorry for the times I hurt you
And make you feel like a clown.

The years we spend together
Get better as time goes on.
Let's continue in our endeavor
To unite and grow in love.

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John Castellenas March 12, 2019 at 2:17 PM A wonderful poem for love. Real love, never died, grow to a beautiful Spring Apple blossom tree. A blessing to see. A amazing poem. Susan Palli March 14, 2019 at 10:24 AM Thank you, John. It’s been 37 years!

Robertina B. July 5, 2018 at 8:01 PM Such a beautifully written and heartwarming rhyme, Susan.. Really melted my heart.. Blessings!! Susan Palli August 28, 2018 at 2:53 PM Thanks Robertina.

Judy Ball March 7, 2017 at 12:59 PM This is lovely Susan. I'm sure he will keep this as a special treasure always. Beautifully written and well expressed it rates a big 7 from me. God Bless, JB

J Wilton Jones February 5, 2017 at 12:08 PM A smile for this one! Very nice.

Dave Rhumour February 5, 2017 at 7:49 AM A refreshing poem with such positive lines on marriage as it should be, ever progressing to closer bonds. Best wishes, Dave Susan Palli February 5, 2017 at 8:44 AM Thank you, Dave!

Elizabeth Kinch February 4, 2017 at 2:12 PM This is beautiful. Sentiments I could echo for my wonderful husband. Forever giving thanks for a happy marriage. Susan Palli February 5, 2017 at 8:44 AM So glad you are blessed too!

Susan Palli January 3, 2017 at 4:00 AM Thank you, Madison.

Abosede Ogundare September 3, 2016 at 8:02 AM This is awesome! great tribute Susan... Susan Palli January 3, 2017 at 4:00 AM Thank you, Abosede!

Beautiful Scars August 28, 2016 at 11:54 AM Susan, lovely poem lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest (sorry for the late comment) :)-luloo

Daniel Turner August 5, 2016 at 6:56 AM Really nice Susan. Testimonial of treasured love and a happy marriage. Doesn't get much better than that!

Probir Gupta August 5, 2016 at 5:08 AM Lovely ... May it go on so ...