Thank You Lord

On this day
it was about seven thirty
in the morning
I sat on a couch reading a poem
when my phone rang
and was told that my uncle had an accident
and he was in the hospital.
I hastily dashed out
as a feather being controlled by breeze
I flew fast to the hospital.

When I got there, I asked
to where he was and they pointed.
Upon entering his ward
I saw his body which tied road had mutilated
I was shocked with fear and I hastily closed my eyes 
I opened one of it to take a sharp glimpse
at how he was doing 
and saw that he can't lift his body and he can't eat. 
My head expanded like a balloon,
my stomach groaned and quivered a bit, 
my heart pounded heavily 
my legs trembled upon the ground 
I opened my mouth to say sorry 
but a word won't come out. 
My eyes filled with tears 
though I struggled, and managed to suppress it.

However, my gratitude to the Almighty
for despite the accident and a lot of pain he endured,
neither his legs nor his hands were paralysed.
neither his eyes nor his brain were injured,
he is still complete as a man.
Most of all,  with mist in our eyes,
we smiled as we faced each other
with words of praise and thanksgiving.
We realize that with less serious accidents,
some had already crossed the fence. 
Glory be to the wonderful Lord.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 9:37 PM
What a powerful message of gratitude and love, Afolabi! I hope your uncle has fully recovered from his accident. He is blessed to have a caring nephew...hugs, Rhonda
Vaso Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 11:26 PM
Afolabi, how do you do it? How do you write such wistful wonderful beautiful poems filled with life's moments, both good and bad! A magical poem indeed!
Godwin Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Oh, what a good write about a terrifying scare! Obviously, he looked worse than he was and I am glad of that. Thank you for sharing the transition from relaxed, to concerned, then scared to devastated to timid relief to joy and thanksgiving! We have all felt such emotions rush and alter, if someone hasn't yet - they will. Good job - Everyone stay well! CayCay
Johnson Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 4:34 PM
a part of life the suffering, but through it swims the better things, cos we will yes prevail, to sing, yes Lord we are so grateful...
Gasun Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 10:53 AM
I'm so sorry of what had happened to your uncle my very dear friend, AM. However, we truly thank the wonderful Lord on His Glory and Mercy! An absolutely beautiful and excellent thanksgiving poem you penned in a narrative form my very dear friend! Thank you so much for sharing! God bless ! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
Horsman Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 5:29 PM
So pleased at the happy ending, to this what is an excellent poem, love the message you portray in this too
Onclaud Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 12:22 AM
a miracle one should be thankful for.... wonderful write, afolabi.. huggs
Pinet Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 6:38 PM
A marvelous display of emotions as one is led upon a trail of magic moments, each encased as a golden nugget or a knife within the author's heart. Emile.
A  Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 5:12 PM
You have a beautiful voice to share Afolabi, a blessing to be.... SKAT
Labeau Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 4:46 PM
perfect if you ask me as me seldom read and do not navigate the trouble of fingers typing the keys of ivory and ebony for an embrace here i fly the coop
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:00 AM
everything happens for a purpose.. but as the words of God said regardless what situation we are we must thank and praise Him still... acts 22:25... =`) well-narrated that you got me glued Afolabi!~Olive Eloisa
Muideen Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 1:20 PM
your wonderful comment is really appreciated Olive. thank you very much.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 6:11 AM
Life, unfortunately, presents to us moments like that and even worse than that! To find though the courage and the peace to thank our Lord is a sign of a magnanimous soul! God bless you and your uncle my dear friend, A.M. for this wonderful poem you shared with us!
Muideen Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 1:17 PM
thank you Demetrios i appreciate you dropped by.
A   Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 12:06 AM
Thank you for the wonderful and uplifting poem, AM... I know you have a wonderful and beautiful soul. Thank you for always giving to us on this site. LINDA
Muideen Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 3:55 AM
Thank you very much for your pleasant comment PD it is much appreciated.
Lindley Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 5:23 PM
Great to read your uncle survived and is going to be ok as a man. His survival is a blessing that should be well considered. Wishing him a speedy recovery!
Muideen Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 5:53 AM
Thank you very much friend,it is much appreciated.
Fraser Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 12:17 PM
I'm so glad to read that your uncle is ok Afolabi. Wishing you and your family a blessed week ahead, James :)
Muideen Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 2:59 AM
Thank you very much for your great I appreciate it.
Austin Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 10:50 AM
Hope your loved one is doing much better by now. Love, daver
Muideen Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 2:57 AM
Yes, he's doing very much better now though he's still in the hospital---ah ah! the accident was very tough, I have never seen such a thing like that in my life.
Muideen Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 2:47 AM
I appreciate your kindness heart Daver thanks.
Nunez Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 10:26 AM
An unfortunate circumstance that gave rise to this riveting write, AM. I am glad the subject survived the accident. An opportunity to praise and express gratitude to the Almighty for His grace. Just some minor things...mail. hugs!
Muideen Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 2:45 AM
Thank you very much for you pleasant comment I really appreciate it.
Kendrick Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 6:10 AM
What a horrific instant in your life and that of your uncle..God spared him for a reason and I hope that he uses his second chance at life for a purpose..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Muideen Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 8:50 AM
Thank you very much for your dropped by to read and comment to my page, I really appreciate your kindness heart.
Hunjeri Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 5:18 PM
Yes Glory be to the wonderful Lord. Am glad to hear your uncle is doing okay. Good day Afolabi
Muideen Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 6:05 PM
Thank you very much Njeri for your pleasant comment. When I saw him today with great energy, I was very happy. My gratitude to GOD.
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