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Thank You List

Thanksgiving is nearly over
Santa is building toys
He has a list for all 
Good girls and wee boys

First, let me be thankful
I'll list some of my joys
There is a husband who
Works even sometimes coy

Then there are the children
Who once stepped on my toes
But at all times now my love
For them grows and grows

God has granted me grandchildren
Oh, now I am so truly blessed
Sometimes I wonder how they are so wise
But then every once in a while, what a mess

Remembering once I was in the loo
My grandson decided to make a drink
Hot cocoa his choice to mix
And not over the sink

He dropped the cocoa powder
Then tried to clean it up
It was spread all over 
Boy! That was rough stuff

But I am blessed to have him
He's an angel in disguise
God sent him to fill a void
In our older lives

This is only a tiny tale
Of what God has granted 
In our lives 
The list of our blessings will last beyond this life

I know this is not true to a list poem but it is how it came out. 
Coy can mean shy...
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Krutsinger Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 11:25 PM
I like it when I get two or three poems out of one situation, so I am glad I am here to observe I am not alone here."He dropped the cocoa powder Then tried to clean it up"
Kendrick Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 3:15 AM
Yes, it is nice to be able to use an idea over and over but I hope that it doesn't get boring to my audience. Thanks for all your visits. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 3:23 PM
I think it came out very well, Sara. Sorry you guys are sick again!
Kendrick Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 2:43 AM
Thanks for stopping by Andrea. I have got a cold (I guess) but the rest of us are okay except Kaizley who was sick last Friday, but I haven't heard from her since so I guess she is at least the same or well. Sara
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 3:46 AM
Lovely, Sara. Oh, those grandchildren can certainly be a handful at times. I have (5) grandchildren ranging from 2-21 years old...my 5 yr. old just finger painted me a picture...she got more paint on the table and floor than on the paper.. Gotta love 'em. Hugs Charlie
Kendrick Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 6:03 AM
Thanks for the visit and taking time to comment on my work. Awesome that you have your own original art work from your granddaughter. I know that is or will be displayed on the refrigerator or framed to hang in a very prominent place. Sara
Skelly Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 2:54 AM
Lovely memories Sara...Delice
Kendrick Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 2:58 AM
Delice, Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara
Baker Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 2:58 PM
Lovely thoughts of family Sara, I enjoyed your poem. Your poet friend Bill
Kendrick Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 2:54 AM
Thank you, Bill. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. Sara
Roper Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 1:15 PM
I had one of my grandchildren make me fall backwards and a big boo-boo on my noggin. All are little children are angels :) love them all. God knows our needs. Love the write. Have a great Christmas with all your loved ones. lots of Love and Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 2:28 PM
Eve, I know that was painful for your head and pride but thank God you were not seriously hurt. Yes, the children are angels and they can make us laugh. Thanks for well wishes for Christmas. I hope it all goes well with you. I hope we all stay well. Thanks for your nice visit. Sara
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November 29, 2021 at 8:16 AM
The cocoa powder story very funny! My daughter’s friend was over eons ago…she started tapping on my kitchen floor. I looked down and their were scuff marks everywhere. I said nothing handed her a sponge…lol
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 9:06 AM
Kim, Our grandson tried to clean it on his own but it was far from clean. How all that happened in such a short length of time. Once we had a home on a lake and I was going to make a chocolate cake with chocolate frosting so I was getting the cocoa out of the cabinet which was over the AC filter and I dropped the cocoa and the lid popped off and the AC came on. That was not a fun afternoon. Your comments added so much to my page. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Poet Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 6:09 AM
Sara, you have written a poem of exceptional beauty. We owe it to God to show our thanks for the graces that he has provided for us. Blessings
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Lasaad, I am so thankful in so many ways just the beauty of each day or some moment in that day makes life worth living and saying a thank you to God. Your visits always are appreciated. Sara
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November 29, 2021 at 3:31 AM
We do have to be thankful for all the graces that God gives us. Beautiful poetry.
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 6:17 AM
Victor, Yes, with children and grandchildren and great grandchildren there are always those good and bad points to be taken into consideration and also the fact that we are all human. Human beings make mistakes and outright miss the mark. Your visit was encouraging. Sara
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