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Thank You I Replied

You are a clown she said. Thank you I replied, adding a smile. Your buffoonish ways bother me, she added. A smirk now. I had not noticed before how lopsided her mouth is. I am sorry, I apologize. I was not listening. You are dumb, she added. Spelling it out. You are D O M. Dumb. I am careful not to laugh. Not wanting to hurt my best friend’s feelings.

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Date: 5/22/2020 7:38:00 PM
This made me laugh out loud, Caren!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/24/2020 1:05:00 AM
I even read this to my husband and son!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/23/2020 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Rhonda. I have to say I was smirking as I wrote it.
Date: 5/21/2020 8:41:00 PM
LOL! I don't picture you as a Dom... not a Sub either for that matter ;), xomo!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/22/2020 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Maureen
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/21/2020 8:43:00 PM
This reminds me of Dennis Lee's humour, my favourite poet since I was wee.

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