Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

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Carndonagh a little town in English translated = Sunday cross called after St Patricks cross situated in the town 

Slieve snaght our local mountain  in Donegal translated = Snow mountain

Magherarnett translated = High plain 

Amazing Grace is in the valley known for its surrounding beauty we call it God's country smiling 

 

 

Thank You God

After the storm gale force red a calm light filled baby blue sky 
whistling birds singing a choir of divine beauty fills the air 
deeply warm touching without profit costing nothing 
fills inside with strength casting dark shadows out always remains
enveloped within prayer death love one's power inside weakness pure

White sparsely scattered mother of pearl clouds cap Snow mountain 
sweeping over Amazing grace dreams casting magic spells spring
Coming down the High plain gazing towards Trawbegga bay
Tides enchanting a dark shade of blue distant thoughts brew 
without cost profits nothing spirit of kindness overwhelming true beams

A cool spring breeze dusting the brow speaks
silently warm finger rays paint a beautiful garden Eden 
Bells tolling calling the flock to worship kneeling humble 
Spirit of freedom cries in the town of the Sunday cross 
blessed I am oh Lord in this amazing view honored by your deep presence

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Monterey Sirak March 25, 2015 at 6:51 AM Your fantastic images portray a beauty that would melt any heart and bring even the hardest soul to a flood of grateful tears.

Wilma Neels March 13, 2015 at 11:26 AM Beautiful write, I can feel the gratitude here Liam ;) Liam Mcdaid March 23, 2015 at 5:21 AM in life he has gifted me with so much i am always in his debt for giving me the chance of living wonderful heartfelt comment wilma thank you kindly dear pal wishing you a beautiful week

Joe Maverick March 12, 2015 at 1:23 AM Enjoyed the serenity in this picture full write Liam, Best wishes..' Liam Mcdaid March 23, 2015 at 5:10 AM best wishes to you also joe thank you dear friend for the very beautiful comment wishing you a great week

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2015 at 6:13 PM This is a touching and beautiful poem of gratitude, Liam. It is alive with imagery. Liam Mcdaid March 23, 2015 at 4:44 AM yeah i have a lot andrea to be thankful for he has shown me a love i never knew wonderful comment dear pal bless you always pal

Anne-Lise Andresen March 11, 2015 at 3:20 PM - Really beautifully written dear Liam - A pleasure to read! (7 ++) - Religion should build people and sharpen our humanity, making us more empathetic and make life beautiful around us - If it does not, then it is not worth any thing ..... I've read this somewhere :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid March 23, 2015 at 4:27 AM smiling anne lise it helps me see the true worth of love listening to the songbirds sing the pleasure and deep beauty it brings wonderful comment dear pal wishing you a blessed beautiful week

Nette Onclaud March 11, 2015 at 3:11 PM ohh, a different theme from you that touches my heart in a spiritual way, liam... so very fine!.. huggs Liam Mcdaid March 23, 2015 at 4:16 AM ah thank you nette i wrote this on the way to mass thinking of love as a special gift in faraway dreams and thoughts yet close in the heart a prayer wishing you a great week dear friend

Robert Lindley March 11, 2015 at 9:34 AM Sorry that family troubles(mother's health issues) has kept me away my friend. This is a great poem! I find that you and Peter never fail to amaze and delight me when reading your work. A7 and a great read this morn.. Liam Mcdaid March 11, 2015 at 2:14 PM ah robert god bless you i will say a prayer for her thank you dear pal for the wonderful comment not on line much these days myself wishing you a beautiful week ahead always great to see you

Alesia Leach March 10, 2015 at 4:35 PM You have a beautiful ways with words and you have created a magnificent painting with them. ;0) Liam Mcdaid March 10, 2015 at 11:37 PM alesia nature in the essence of its beauty just paints all by itself thank you for your wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you dear friend

Jan Allison March 10, 2015 at 3:20 PM I am in awe of the beauty you have created in this stunning write - such amazing imagery Liam - makes me want to get on a plane and visit! Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Liam Mcdaid March 10, 2015 at 11:30 PM jan looking around me listening to birds wild free in choir sings inside the heart the freedom of a deep untainted love your welcome to visit anytime dear pal wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you

Tim Smith March 10, 2015 at 1:29 PM Simply stunning liam....one of your best.... tim Liam Mcdaid March 10, 2015 at 11:26 PM ahh tim your so sweet thank you so kindly dear friend heartfelt appreciated bless you pal

Dorian Petersen Potter March 10, 2015 at 12:07 PM Hi Liam! This is a very beautiful amazing poem giving thanks to God you've penned here my dearest friend.Just dazzling!Another diamond from your pen!A huge 7 +++++ to you! A fav too! For sure a very wonderful, beautiful poem to be held so very close to ones heart.smiling.I just love the way you describe all this beauty and majestic scenery thru your eyes, it's like one was right there next to you seeing it and living it all thru your vision.I'm so moved to tears of happiness by your life spiritual renewal awakening and all that.Truly a mighty golden pen!!To me you're always the best Liam! So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet! I wish you the best in everything! Have a very lovely day Liam! In His light! God bless you always! :) Love and hugs! xoxox D.^O^ Liam Mcdaid March 10, 2015 at 11:25 PM thank you dorian dear friend the lord is my guardian who guides my pen through his beautiful scenery wonderful comment bless you

Poesy Relish March 10, 2015 at 11:04 AM Blissful is what I felt after reading this poem... i was there with you envisioning the beauty of spring... a blessing indeed... nad Liam Mcdaid March 10, 2015 at 11:14 PM nadiya spring always holds me life after the cold darkness of winter to see the color return with beauty truly wonderful comment dear friend thank you so kindly bless you

Emile Pinet March 10, 2015 at 10:41 AM You take us to the top of Snow Mountain and show us your view of life. A feeling of "free" pervades within your words setting the scene with crisp breathes of expectation. The allure of Spring has captured your imagination and allowed you to be one with your surroundings and in this heightened state of awareness you share the innocence of a man enamored with the beauty of nature. Emile #7 Liam Mcdaid March 10, 2015 at 11:03 PM beauty just holds the heart as i head to mass emile spring captivates me just holding the freedom of such a precious love in the heart untainted by the world outside the reality of it thank you ever so kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated