Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

Thank You For Loving Me

Within the sparkle of the sun the music of your eyes
and on your scented pillow a sudden flash of truth    
"we can reach the other side"
Silken kisses that slide inside my heart
full of memory ray  
Whispered secrets that make no sense
innocence of one lovely afternoon
what better way to spend our three o'clock
then wrapped inside each other's gauze, ;
emotionally in love like the first day we met
we sparkle like the sun, matching each others smile  
More brilliant then a thousand watts
More jubilant then seventh heaven
More blessed then angels at the archery of God
we are, ... thank you  !

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John Castellenas October 4, 2020 at 9:45 AM Beautiful use of words. "emotionally in love like the first day we met we sparkle like the sun, matching each others smile More brilliant then a thousand watts More jubilant then seventh heaven More blessed then angels at the archery of God we are, ... thank you !" The above lines could stand alone. I liked the joy and the happiness in the words. A amazing poem dear Pixie.

James Marshall Goff September 23, 2020 at 12:33 PM A splendid poem of gratitude!

Rico Leffanta September 23, 2020 at 11:55 AM The pandemic has certainly restricted public view of young people in love! Aloha! Rico

Victor Buhagiar September 23, 2020 at 1:03 AM A mixture of romance and spiritual inspiration. You have been missed. ~~