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Thank You David Bowie

Suffering always clogged my heart Grim visaged was my soul Eyes dim, shoulders a heavy laden cart Never a day rose, that I felt whole Til an image too close, slashed me awake I braved the plunge, put this rot on paper Felt change trickle, not just therapy fake Now, I gather up my words Not worrying of form or labour And let them loose like migrating birds. Written 20th May 2018 for Broken Wings Contest: Let Your Pen Drip Theme: I gather up my words 9th placing Rhyme AB

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Date: 6/5/2018 9:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Virginia. Well done.
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Virginia Waters
Date: 6/21/2018 1:06:00 AM
thank you line
Date: 5/23/2018 10:48:00 AM
Virginia, congratulations on your win in my contest with this well done write ~
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Virginia Waters
Date: 6/21/2018 1:06:00 AM
Thank you allowing some unsaid things out - love always - V
Date: 5/23/2018 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations Virginia :)
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Virginia Waters
Date: 6/21/2018 1:07:00 AM
thank you Heidi
Date: 5/22/2018 9:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. Did not even notice the contest wors, they were used so smoothly. Well done.
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Virginia Waters
Date: 5/23/2018 12:51:00 AM
wow these contests fill so quick. Thank you, don't know how you find time to reply all but much appreciated - V

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