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For my birthday She collected my poems And gave me My first book of poetry From the heart Wrapped like a kiss In the milk of her love. And I want to thank you For the sprinkle of diamond Droplets of dew On the petals of my thirst.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/9/2009 11:40:00 PM
David this is truly pure poetry in its most beautiful place - the heart - Very beautiful - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 4/7/2009 12:36:00 PM
congrats on being featured
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Date: 4/6/2009 5:26:00 PM
This is written beautifully, Lovely gift to give...Congratulations on the feature...GB Always, Tyesha
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:27:00 PM
what an utterly awesome gift. I did the same for my mother for Christmas with my poems
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Date: 4/6/2009 2:30:00 PM
A romantic and special gift, oh the CD is too. Great write! Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:33:00 PM
Truly beautiful. Congrats on a well deserved featured write. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:04:00 AM
Hello David, nice poetry. I love it. Congratulations. Ernilando
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Date: 4/5/2009 11:12:00 PM
Nice one dude Why not check my poems 1. Beneath in my heart 2. Perfect Winter Night Looking for your comments
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Date: 4/2/2009 3:43:00 PM
David, great joy in this poem! love it! Jim
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Date: 4/2/2009 2:47:00 PM
She must care a lot to give you such a wonderful birthday gift, David. No doubt, it will be a prized possession all of your life!
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