David Smalling Poet Free verse

Thank You Cd

For my birthday
She collected my poems
And gave me
My first book of poetry
From the heart
Wrapped like a kiss
In the milk of her love.

And I want to thank you
For the sprinkle of diamond
Droplets of dew
On the petals of my thirst.

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Michael Jordan April 9, 2009 at 11:40 PM David this is truly pure poetry in its most beautiful place - the heart - Very beautiful - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj

Frank F. Atanacio April 7, 2009 at 12:36 PM congrats on being featured

Tyesha Ehigiator April 6, 2009 at 5:26 PM This is written beautifully, Lovely gift to give...Congratulations on the feature...GB Always, Tyesha

Tulisha Blackshear April 6, 2009 at 4:27 PM what an utterly awesome gift. I did the same for my mother for Christmas with my poems

Lena Townsend April 6, 2009 at 2:30 PM A romantic and special gift, oh the CD is too. Great write! Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita

Sharon Winter April 6, 2009 at 1:33 PM Truly beautiful. Congrats on a well deserved featured write. Love, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown April 6, 2009 at 6:14 AM Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff April 6, 2009 at 4:04 AM Hello David, nice poetry. I love it. Congratulations. Ernilando

Chandru Ganesh S April 5, 2009 at 11:12 PM Nice one dude Why not check my poems 1. Beneath in my heart 2. Perfect Winter Night Looking for your comments

James Marshall Goff April 2, 2009 at 3:43 PM David, great joy in this poem! love it! Jim

Carolyn Devonshire April 2, 2009 at 2:47 PM She must care a lot to give you such a wonderful birthday gift, David. No doubt, it will be a prized possession all of your life!