Thank You, Catie

Ah Catie,
Know I know somebody cares
I shall not sleep
Unless I am well prepared
To suckle at your lips
Some vast truth
Of what you expect from honeyless root.
You are the best friend yet
And I regret
I did not excite the eroticism of your breast
Am I gone impotent so early
Is my libido
Only to be bought over the counter now?
Words, Miss Lindsay
Need more than medication
Viagra
Is only half my hidden frustration
I confess I write for your glory
Best
When I am erasing the story
And ejaculating rage
In the sightless eye of the page
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 28, 2012 at 10:49 AM
yes dear poet friend verses with a persons name in them are best sent privately especially when writen so plainly of explict sexual rather than sensual things..perhaps try a re-write with a broader take..Light & Love
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March 28, 2012 at 7:45 AM
Stop being a tough nut to crack Catie and help the man with his ummm.... ejaculating rage o_O lol.. And L'nass you be nice to our Catie, she's a pretty special lady.. xx
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