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One of 30 poems I wrote in a series about my experience and feelings inside a relationship.

Thank You

Thank you for being rock solid for me
Allowing me to simply be
Give me space to come crashing down
To sing out of key to smile or frown

Thank you for being willing to stay
Each time I tried to run away
Hold me, kiss me till it passes
When I stare through gloomy glasses

Love me cos I'm yours to keep
Hold me while I fall asleep
Let me go so I can move
Marvel when I'm in the groove

When my brain and heart short circuit
Read the manual on how to work it
When I'm rushing slow me calmly
Be my strength when I go barmy

Understand my every act
No matter how the odds are stacked
And when I want to run and hide
Open your heart I'll climb inside

When I am loving sweet and tender
Welcome me, reflect, surrender
Give your life right by my side
And love each second of the ride

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/10/2015 11:02:00 PM
Scott, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/7/2015 5:28:00 PM
Saw this featured on the homepage, and I just had to stop in and tell you how sweet you are! Nice poetry :)
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Date: 9/21/2014 6:56:00 PM
Wonderfully created! Hard 2 find...
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Date: 9/20/2014 3:37:00 PM
Nice poem from the heart
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Date: 9/19/2014 8:20:00 AM
Hi Scott, I absolutely love your poem and your style of writing. I like the message of unconditional love--acceptance--vulnerability--self awareness. Keep writing!
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Date: 9/18/2014 11:42:00 AM
Hi Scott, I'm new to poetry writing, but really enjoyed your 'Thank You' poem, it resonated with me. Thank you for sharing it with us. Amanda.
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Date: 9/18/2014 10:53:00 AM
Hi Scott Thank you, thank you, I really enjoyed reading your poetry entitled Thank you. I really needed to see and read this type of poetry. I haven't been on the site for a while until today. I look forward to reading much more of you work great write.
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Date: 9/18/2014 10:16:00 AM
The success behind....
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Date: 9/18/2014 9:11:00 AM
Simply Stunning.. Love this :)
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Date: 9/18/2014 5:08:00 AM
Scott,....forgive the typos "delcarative" and "emotion....faulty keyboard :>) .....Gene.
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Date: 9/18/2014 5:02:00 AM
Very smoothly constructive declaritive poem that uniquely covers a broad span of eimotion in well composed descriptive phrasing. I envjoyed this very much..Your PS friend....Gene.
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Date: 9/18/2014 4:17:00 AM
I guess that everyone would like to hear such words ;) Very personal poem, it takes courage to talk about own flaws and weaknesses, but once we admit we have them and realize there is this one special person who accepts and help us overcome them, everything seems better ;)
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Date: 9/18/2014 1:51:00 AM
Hi Scott i honestly like and love your poem!!! I hope you live life lost in world of poetry he he he
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Date: 9/18/2014 1:31:00 AM
Wow, good
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Date: 9/17/2014 11:42:00 PM
What beautiful words and sentiment... loved it...kj
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Date: 9/17/2014 9:04:00 PM
I really enjoyed it good write eve
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