Thank You

Inside out
like a backward bent umbrella,
dusty grey and textured in my slip-on dress
I hear
piles of books. Musty and scuffed. Lining her passageway. It moves me.

This is what I’m trying to say:
Thank you for yesterday. And the day before that. And all the days before that since we first became friends all those years ago.

This is what I’m trying to say:
With a strap running through the middle of my foot. Pleated like pine cone petals,
I hear

the most quiet place I know is underneath the water in a mountain pool.
This is what I’m trying to say:
Outside in.

Thank you for tomorrow. And the day before that. And all the days before that since we first became friends all those years ago.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 19, 2016 at 9:09 PM
ZARA, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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September 12, 2013 at 2:34 PM
Hi Zara, this is a sweet thank you for a friend or any friend who stuck by all through the years... I have enjoyed all your writes so far... hope you will post other poems...xox..Linda
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September 9, 2013 at 5:19 PM
This is a awe inspiring piece, the first poem of yours I am reading. You have skills. I will check out a few more before I go.
Neels Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 2:13 AM
Hey there Zara, I love this piece of yours and the repeating lines just makes it perfect.. Stunning way to convey your message :) Wilma
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