Thank You

Thank you for helping me  with my hair I was really filled with dispair
Thank you for helping me with my hair you brought me out of a state
of depression and loneliness when I rubbed my hands through my tresses

I begin to feel beautiful natural and free as I careres that special part of me
I can feel the layers of sadness begin to leave my body and soul as I begin
to take on a new shape and a rejuvenated soul I love this new me I can see

the sun shinning through when I opened my eyes and looked in the mirror I
can behold the beauty within me






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Date: 11/22/2010 9:50:00 PM
Smile ~ "Yes," there is sooo much beauty to be found within "Every 'Precious Heart & Soul" my dear &, it is Always a joy to find the realization of this truth found amid anothers "Beautiful Heart" so, do not Ever let go of this, "Treasure of Light!!!" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Holiday My Dear, Amid The Mirror So Shining; 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:33:00 PM
Enjoyed the reading of your work..Sara
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:32:00 PM
Very awesome and ingruing write on Thank you, Patricia
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