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Thank You

As sun rises, so does the fog Down in foggy bottom The creek's rise adds to condensation On the hill begins Autumn Gray skies revealed by dawn's crack of light Dew drops from oak's leaves green Hydrangea's leaves so moist with dew Humidity upon all gleens The grass in silvery streaks at dawn As skies look a pale gray Will this day bring a better time A healing heading our way Thank God for this gift of a new day Being born in a free land For being brought to know You early Introduced to Your way
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Maverick Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 3:29 PM
A very emotive, and image rich write Sara, so refreshing to read this a Joy indeed.'
Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 3:11 AM
Joe, I am glad that you found this refreshing. Sara
Ashley Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 8:18 PM
Dear Sara, your beautiful poem is deep and prayerful. Just so lovely in its poetic expression capturing a gentle feeling of Autumn. As the new sun rises so does the golden glow of renewed hope. Your gratitude is keenly felt. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 4:39 AM
Susan, I am glad that you saw the hope within my lines. Your visits always bring an added dimension to my page. Sara
Horne Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 12:42 PM
yes, such truth here, my friend - every day is a gift from God
Kendrick Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 1:44 PM
Thank you, Jack. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Proxenos Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 11:43 PM
We must thank God for every new day, each one is a blessing from Him and no one say that every day must be perfect, because if we didn't have some strife in life, how would be able to compare to the awesome ones we have had. A fave for me Sara. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Kendrick Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 3:34 AM
Jennifer, I am honored that you would fav my work. Yes, without the bad we would not appreciate the good as much. Thank you for visiting and taking time to comment. Sara
George Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 9:30 AM
Each sunrise is a new day of promises and blessings. We have to thank God for all He gives us ! A beautiful poem from a thankful heart. Sara, you have painted a vivid image of Autumn...
Kendrick Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 10:49 AM
Valsa, I appreciate the kind words and encouragement in all your comments. Sara
Poet Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 7:49 PM
Crafted wonderfully well to highlight God's Blessings through our own inner appreciation. Excellent poem, Sara. Blessings
Kendrick Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 3:41 AM
Sotto, For sure if we don't appreciate then we never know what is out there for us to be thankful for in this world. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 1:15 AM
Great imagery. It is right to thank God for each day.
Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 4:04 AM
Yes, it is but we do forget sometimes. For some reason a lot of people never thank him or anyone. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Roper Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 7:03 PM
Great feeling and colorful imagery, my friend, in your verse. Enjoyed reading. Many blessings my friend to you and yours. I hope your son is doing better.
Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 4:02 AM
Eve, Thank you for the nice review. Our son is better. The abscess is MRSA bacteria. It did not come from his heart. There are no abnormal or bad bacteria around his heart so all clear there. I appreciate your concern. Sara
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August 16, 2022 at 5:02 PM
Such a beautiful poem of gratitude Sara! Debx
Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 3:57 AM
I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara
Pandit Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 3:31 PM
Beautiful hues you convey, Sara, in this verse of thanks and gratitude.
Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 3:51 AM
I am glad that you found beauty, Vijay. Nothing like gratitude we all need it, and God loves a grateful heart. Sara
Cunningham Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 2:49 PM
We have so much to be grateful for Sara, I hope your son is on the road to recovery. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 4:56 AM
That's great to hear Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 3:34 AM
Tom, I believe he is. We talked to him on the phone a couple of times yesterday and his spirits seem good. He does not have any bacteria around his heart so that is good news. Sara
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