Thank You


Thanks peoples who gave me pain,
Everything turns into gain..
Much I learnt much is remain,
Words are running in my blood through my veins..
Sucking people I met in my life ,
They had words, worked like a knife.
Never mind but you hadn't my vibe,
I know my soul will make it bright .
Sorry I argued it was my mistake,
Thanks for judging me from my back.
I thought who was my soulmate ,
They Bitten me here like a snake ..
But thanks for the pain , 
It taught me a lots ,
How fool was I,
supposed The real was sobs..
They steal my dream 
Made me nightmare ,
I cried with night .
Accepted as god gifted dare ..
I didn't forget any words 
Everything is in my mind ,
Waiting for my turn 
I will you remind .
Thanks again dear for this surprise,
I am a sun 
After the night I will be rise ..
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Kumar Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 9:55 PM
Hellow every one do follow and show your love with a comment ??
Muhaz Avatar
June 28, 2022 at 9:10 AM
i followed you bro , how to write rhyme poem
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 10:39 AM
Hello Amit Kumar, break ups are hared. Yes I know it hurts. Better to find out now. Then marry and divorce. So nice to meet you. Enjoy your day my friend.
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