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Thank You!!

When I drowned into the sea of pain. With all the efforts gone in vain.... Money too, gone down the drain.... My back though, remained adamantly lame.... To you doctor, for treatment I came.... And life was never the same again.... Into thin air...my trouble vanished... I recovered? …Am astonished!! What a change in me you brought.... Backache!!- I totally forgot! I walk, sit and stand easily.... And finally! I now sleep peacefully! Dr Kamath!! Oh! How do I describe you ? One who brought me huge relief...With a capsules few? One who cured me from severe pain ? Or one who saved me from turning insane? My feelings, Have no words to express.... My emotions though, are hard to suppress.... With total gratitude to you today… A very special “Thank You”!! I want to say. © Rima.Anil.Naik

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Date: 4/22/2009 10:39:00 PM
Enjoyed the piece, really think you can do without the "..." as line breaks are sufficient.
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