Thank Them--All

The fair breeze had 
steadily blown
And in the rocky 
pasture, the lilies 
danced.

The bubbly boys 
saw us
And giggled and 
shyly had run.

The grave cloud 
floated slowly over
And caringly had 
shaded us.

The wild grass 
grown very high
Had us in her lush 
lap hid.

The old tree behind 
her trunk
We had standing 
become one.
                                     The 
old man who 
was Godly 
And thus couldn’t us 
see.
                                     Those 
seeing birds 
in gaiety had sung
When by the country 
we walked
And secretly kissed, 
cuddled, and kissed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Rogers Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 4:10 PM
Very nice imagery fayaz bhat, I especially liked, "old man who was Godly And thus couldn’t us see." Thanks for sharing/Sinclair
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February 12, 2014 at 12:07 AM
I agree with you FB, it is only a paradox when there are two known opposing factors, if it is unknown to exist, it is impossible to be a paradoxical element of an opposition. I have to read more of your work tomorrow!...I really like your pen!//Sinclair
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February 11, 2014 at 11:59 PM
Thankyou dear Robert. Infact my editor had called it a paradox, and my reply was "Eyes cannot see what mind does not know"
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