Thank God Someone Prayed

Oh
Someone
Prayed for me
When I was down
Yes, Somebody prayed…
And my God brought me out
Because someone prayed for me
I should have been gone… but Now I
Can shout, cause some one prayed for me
It was said in three days I would die
What a lie… Thank God, someone prayed for me….  



Count Up: This titled form, consists of exactly ten lines, the first line having one syllable, 
each succeeding line adding a syllable, with a total count of fifty-five syllables. This form 
allows both rhyme and meter, while its similar cousin, the ETHEREE, allows neither.
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March 14, 2010 at 5:22 PM
Dear Adell, The Painting of this Poetic Tapestry is simply Beautiful Insightful Footnote Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment Today YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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October 1, 2009 at 8:24 AM
Never mind th form,Smile! I love the thought, prayer works, God bless, Sincerely, Moses THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS, ALWAYS WELCOME AND APPRECIATED.
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