Thai Mountain Bats

6 pm the sun slinking down

birds of prey hovver potential feed 

people gathered in the picnic area

a howling noise a stunning site

bats spew from the mountain top

twenty minutes and out of site

`til the dawn begins.








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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Culverhouse Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 7:08 AM
Neet....have you seen this? cool stuff!
Beadnall Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 11:49 AM
Hi Doris, yes i have seen this and it is more spectacular than can be put into words, i will put a link on so you can see, sorry for delayed reply ....http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yFO6Hcy5ZkM
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