Nette Onclaud Poet Kimo

Tgif---Thank God It's Friday

* Ey, gt d cr kys…m mtg ^ wd d crw ds f-dy nyt…
ur brgr pak s in d  ref.

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I’m hitting the breeze, painting the town red
fine leather and stockings dressed
with rockin’ gal friends in tow


The car scoots on Friday night’s bar near west
dance steps, cocktails whirl jazz lights…
while you’re TV couching

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*Hey, got the car keys… I’m meeting up with the crew
this Friday night… your burger pack is in the ref.


Text Talk Contest of David Williams

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Kash Poet September 27, 2012 at 5:58 AM She told two short lines 1st and 2nd...you can have longer 3rd and 4 th lines.

Gwendolen Song September 10, 2012 at 4:08 PM Nette! Aloha! Why is it that I never get texts like these?..How inviting to spend an evening on the town with you! Gotta love the ending...it's like sayin'--I'm outta here! Go cook your own suppa!! hahaha Enjoyed this one a ton!! :) gwendolen

John Boak September 10, 2012 at 10:58 AM you are from the text capital of the world aren't you?...lol good piece for a contest...i as expecting another congrats on the comments....i think this should be, or should have been ( am not sure when this contest was held since i haven't gone online for a long period of time) a winner. so congrats for this lovely witty piece.

Kash Poet August 26, 2012 at 12:26 PM Wow Nette Love this witty text!Very good entry for the contest.Best wishes to you.

Delysia Hendricks August 25, 2012 at 10:43 PM lol. You sure know your text talk. Well done, Nette. Good luck in the contest with this lil' gem. :)

Good Night August 25, 2012 at 4:56 AM i like it good poem for the contest

Jack Horne August 24, 2012 at 2:43 PM Love this fun write, Nette - boy, if anyone sent me a text message like that I would spend all Friday night deciphering it, lol

Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2012 at 12:07 PM ........Yes, thank God it`s Friday........ - Luck in contest Nette. - Take care - love // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey August 24, 2012 at 11:44 AM What an extraordinary and special write my friend! I just LOVE Fridays as well! Its time to have some fun, right Nette? My wife and I still have some good times left within us! I still can party with the best of them on Friday nights! Then I'm home around midnight dead tired wanting sleep...just kidding, kinda! This is a phenomenal poem, I really love this write...Great Work!!

Bl Devnath August 24, 2012 at 11:44 AM Hi! friend, it's wonderful. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Wilma Neels August 24, 2012 at 11:40 AM Hey Nette, your title got me nodding my head in agreement ;) enjoyed this one, wishing you the best for David's contest.. Have an awesome weekend! *hugs*

Daver Austin August 24, 2012 at 10:18 AM This was aimed directly at me, dear nette - old daver, couching. Except, I use a lazy boy. In my dreams, I'd love to join you ladies at the bar. Supersensationalexpialodcious. Love, daver

Dinda Minardi August 24, 2012 at 9:08 AM God, All I could guess was the last sentence of the text message.. A very clever one! Gudlak in d cntst :))