Textbook Execution

blindfolded and bound open fire ~ or sex appeal sparks burst from the hearth By David Kavanagh

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Sotto Poet

Date: 11/16/2021 1:36:00 PM

Matches have been lit in this one because it leaves options open, such as which path to go, even though this will raise the pulse rate.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/16/2021 2:27:00 PM

One way or another Lasaad, the heart rate will certainly be rapid, When blindfolded all the other senses become heightened, indeed I do leave options open, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 11/16/2021 12:28:00 PM

Kings of Leon This sex is on fire Textbook David Executed perfectly

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/16/2021 1:36:00 PM

Thanks Christopher, nice analogy, I like that song too, cheers David

Gary Radice

Date: 11/16/2021 7:52:00 AM

I'm unsure whether someone is about to meet their demise, someone is engaging in BDSM or it's referring to Heather Keane's "Ellie Blake's Frostblood" I quote from Google.."Sparks leaped from the hearth and settled onto my fingers, heat drawn to heat, and glittered like molten gems against my skin."..Your work intrigues David - never have so few words made me pause and think and rethink for so long. Cheers - Gary

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/16/2021 8:16:00 AM

Heya Gary, that is some quote, fantastic literature, this one can go either way, maybe Bon Jovi's lyric (shot through the heart and your to blame darling you give love a bad name) is nearer the mark here, I'm delighted when my work gets people thinking, mission accomplished, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/16/2021 7:31:00 AM

Well, this one leaves options open as to which path to follow. Flames are being fanned.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/16/2021 7:45:00 AM

Ha certainly does Jenna, both will raise the blood pressure, think I'll skip the firing squad, take my chances, by the fire, cheers David