Texian Macabre Arena

The First Texian Macabre Arena Ballad (The extended free-fallen edition)
 
In another life, is where I first saw your face!
One summer afternoon, lying wounded next to the dead
Unopened gun powder, mass destruction, a land of disgrace
A blood thirst battlefield is where I first saw your face
The sound of war, hidden behind bleeding hands
Crawlers, render their lives giving grace
 
Jaws of steel, broken, embracing, warm feelings
Summer rain, lungs filled with blood, one last post
Glorious by numbers, screaming blades
Gemstone in touch with the Holy Ghost  
Soldiers come in a little close 
Crawling, missing limbs, 
Twisted nightmare with no ending

Macabre reminder, retracing the aroma of eternal life
Secrets buried like a treasure under walls of sudden death
Revolutionary tears found on a rusted Bowie knife
Lanterns, crackling against the dying wind
Dirt piles of crushed windpipes -- sudden death
Rummage like garbage, the dead Texian
A Falling Alamo Star, taking one last twinkle upon the sky

Forgotten Patriots, I can't remember the names
Written on walls, I can't remember the names
A folktale arena is where I first saw your face
Fairness of stuttered surrender slicing through iron brace
Crawling, with the hunger to live, a clean finish with grace
Exposing, scars needing mother's hands, mothers face

Across infested meadows, the aroma of burning skin
Distant, before Texas and her annexation, 
Gruesome, before I lived, Texas and her mortal sin
I pledge, my love, the honor, a legion, I'm a full blown Texian
To Every Forgotten Texian Patriot----- We Win!

By: PD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Farmer Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 3:35 PM
wow
Inman Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 7:16 AM
Reading a couple of your poems PD. Very powerful. Lived in Houston when I was 7 for a few months. Very interesting history. Enjoyed the read.
Dunn Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 8:25 PM
Dear Linda Rock on remember the ALAMO, MY texan sister of the state that should never be walked upon, let it's flags colors never fade away, bravo, cheri
Spagnola Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 11:59 PM
Excuse me, but friggin wow! I have never smelled, heard, experienced others horrific yet glorifying demise quite like this before. What a wondrous poem :), jill
Yvonne Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 6:32 PM
don't forget the Alamo...
Callus Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 2:19 PM
An expressive write with stunning imagery; this ballad could easily be made into a film / documentary (it already is in my mind). I will now read it again to savour the full beauty of it! // paul
Guzzi Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 7:58 PM
Texas has an interesting history. Light & Love
Dunn Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 3:52 PM
WOW OK OK THE ALAMO IT IS, BUT FIRST I HAVE TO FINISH THE TWO I'M WORKING ON NOW MY GOOD FRIEND. LOL TAKE CARE CHERI
Toil Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 8:18 AM
Beautiful sketch of what must have indeed been a macabre scene. I imagine it must have been hell there, knowing you were going to die, yet fighting on regardless. I suppose that is why we honor them. Excellent poem, my lovely Texian sweetheart. Luv & Hugs;)...BH
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April 5, 2014 at 5:49 PM
Good morning my dearest sis! Stopping by to enjoy once again this superb ballad of yours! TYSM again! May I als take this chance to thank for ur very encouraging comments on my latest poems, your lovely visit which always complete my day & everything . Forever thanks my loving BFF. Iloveu. I was here last night but got problem w/ captcha when commenting then loggin in. Now, it's ok. I txt u also. Hope u receive it & Hope u'r doin well my forever loving sis! Hugs & kisses! 4evrsis-BFFLeo
Carter Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 9:00 AM
Captures horrors of war, sadly still relevant today. Some things are worth fighting for though but its tragic fallen soldiers don't reap the benefit, they fought for the future of others. Excellently put. Rob
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 1:15 PM
Unique, impassioned piece!
Curtis C. Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 7:54 PM
A deep poem until, I read the semi gruesome arena. Excellent write. This is what Texans are made of. Purity. I.CCY
Makama Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 4:14 PM
as always.. An excellent poem and very lovely. Thanks a lot for the share
Poet Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 10:00 AM
REALLY NICE AGAIN YOU ARE OUGHT TO BE CALLED AGAIN THE BEST POET MY FRIEND........................LUV CRYSTAL
Mccutcheon Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 7:01 PM
WOW that is all I can say. An amazing write and so poignant. Thank you for sharing such a powerful write. Charlene
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 6:25 PM
The strength of your convictions is laid bare in this powerful piece along with your vivid outstanding imagery. A really wonderful write PD.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 4:49 PM
Soup mail, I will be back to comment.
Roger  Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 11:04 AM
I would i be wrong if i just said each of your poem leaves me speechless? Each new that you ink out i think its better than all then before i know another one drops in, tearing each thought in me of how our generation is lucky to have you Linda, the ironic poetry destroyer who instead creates it
Hamilton Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 6:36 AM
very deep write Linda so many layers here paint a picture both macabre and touching hugs
Meyer Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 10:57 AM
Across infested meadows, the aroma of burning skin. Distant, before Texas and her annexation, Gruesome, before I lived, Texas and her mortal sin I pledge, my love, the honor, a legion, I'm a full blown Texian To Every Forgotten Texian Patriot----- We Win! Love this....
K. Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 5:57 AM
back here again to just say that it was nice to hear from you pd, glad you enjoyed listening to me (albeit me longwinded), thank you for listening to that -- so what did you eat for your 2nd breakfast? fish?? haha!
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March 21, 2014 at 2:44 PM
I do believe that only true poets have been writing true history about human life for thousand years...So the creation is not only a poem but also true history of the time...Great work for our future...Best wishes from India dear...
Flannery Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 2:11 PM
So great to read your poems again. You have such great writing abilities I am always amazed. Great write as always Linda. Thank You for you kind words also. Take care and God Bless!
Dunn Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 2:11 PM
Hey dear friend have not heard from you lately I have missed you. Glad you enjoyed by the bay. I'll be on off and on today. got work to do on and off line. happy to get your comment. if you like to talk let me. happy to go and get lunch will be back on.cheri
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