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Tethered, Weathered and Feathered

Tethered, Weathered and Feathered


Whom is that man who got tethered?
Looks like he is overly well weathered
Oh my, he really, really got feathered.

Written: July 17, 2015
Theresa Marie W-C

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/26/2015 4:39:00 PM

This write is so funny, thanks for shared. Excellence...........A..M.

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/26/2015 11:09:00 PM

Thank you so very much A.M. for your comment on this fun penned rhyme of mine... Also thanks for the excellent word.... Theresa

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/26/2015 10:28:00 AM

Hello Theresa!! Thanks so much for commenting on my Clerihew write on "Frankenstein's Monster," and for the Top Rating + FAV!! The rhyming sequence and short storyline here on your write are superb!! (Just so you know, you could classify this write as a "Rhyme" which is in the Poetry Soup pick list. It is technically a "Perfect Rhyme," since each verse is of the same length and have corresponding balance and symmetry. I hope this helps!!) A "7" + FAV from me too for a great job here. Best, Gary

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/26/2015 3:52:00 PM

Theresa, No problem at all. I'm always happy to help as I can. Three Lines also form what is know as a "Tercet" which can be rhymed or unrhymed (it's a subset of the Terza Rima style). But for regular rhyme writes, they can be as few as only two-lines, which is the minimum. You actually wrote a very technically superb Perfect Rhyme in which each verse had the same amount of words in balance. Great Work Again!! And so, please do mark it as a "Rhyme." Best!! Gary

Theresa Cw
Date: 7/26/2015 2:45:00 PM

Thank you very much Gary for enlightening me for the Perfect Rhyme, was not too sure if I could call it a rhyme for it was only three lines. I thought if it only has three lines it would be called something else. thank you for the 7 and the FAV. Best to you also, Theresa