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Tethered To a Moment

Tethered to a moment, I won’t break free or give a different answer when I’m asked about the time most beautiful for me because in rapture that one night I basked! It was September. I’d turned seventeen. Tethered to a moment, I won’t break free. Not many things could make my heart careen. Romance I’d always yearned for came to be! His eyes, sweet chocolate, I always see when I recall the gaze I dipped into. Tethered to a moment, I won’t break free from kisses - pure ambrosia through and through. A time that magical cannot be gone. I resurrect it with my poetry. The boy was in my past, yet he lives on! Tethered to a moment, I won’t break free. Aug. 27, 2021 for Edward Ibeh's This Or That, Vol 6 Poetry Contest Title chosen: Tethered to a Moment

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Date: 9/8/2021 7:19:00 PM
My, my! A true romantic! So exquisitely penned, congrats on your win, Andrea!
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Date: 9/8/2021 4:35:00 PM
So magical...Your poems are always a breath of fresh air...A fave for me..
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Date: 9/8/2021 3:19:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this emotive, beautiful piece, Andrea!:-)
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Date: 9/8/2021 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Andrea. You have crafted with your talented pen an exquisite poem with profound thoughts Blessings and thanks for your comment on my page.
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Date: 9/8/2021 9:58:00 AM
Ah, first love so beautifully expressed Andrea! We always remember that first love. Love the movement of the theme from verse to verse - it really anchors the theme of the poem and ties everything together! Congratulations for your win. Sending you blessings!
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Date: 9/8/2021 8:26:00 AM
I always enjoy reading your works. This is one of them. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/29/2021 11:21:00 AM
Kisses - pure ambrosia! For that alone, worth the read…mmm
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Date: 8/28/2021 11:46:00 AM
"His eyes, sweet chocolate"? You ought to win just for that!
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Date: 8/28/2021 8:01:00 AM
Recalling a sweet moment, lovely.. This was a good prompt. Good luck in contest…Delice
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Date: 8/28/2021 7:56:00 AM
A sweet memory that lives in your mind Ria... Am in awe of your rhyming skills generally... in all your rhymes sweet friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/28/2021 5:14:00 AM
He surely made a mark on you and now resides in memories. Lovely romantic write, Andrea.
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Date: 8/28/2021 1:32:00 AM
A lovely quatern on the theme, Andrea, I chose a sad topic on the same theme:)
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Date: 8/28/2021 1:23:00 AM
You often mentioned tis lover. Wonder what happened to him. Hugs
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Date: 8/27/2021 8:11:00 PM
A love which haunts still...good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/27/2021 6:13:00 PM
Marvelous, Andrea, with just the right format, too. Wishing you the best in the contest.
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