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Testing the Sun

Testing The Sun



Its about to happen
You can feel it

There’s a bursting scented vibrancy
Lingering
Happening
Almost
Ready

A slow stretching yawn reverberates
It dissipates and grows
Permeates 
Percolates
Rushes outward
But
Waits

Sleepily cracking an eye
It peers around
Secretly shaking off blankets
Dabbles a toe in the air
Testing the sun

If you wait, listen to the stillness
You can hear rising sap
Drawing deep upward to buds
Which seem to scream a new green
And yearn for the moment of leaves

The colours are mixing
Designing chemicals of fluorescence
Predicting their flourishes of blooming petals
Teasing
Niggling
At the edges of their swelling
And somnolent slumbery
Deliberating
On seconds
They
 
A – C – H – E

In yellow Mimosa puffs  

Already they are dreaming
Caught between the spurt of seed
Dreaming of splashes fecundate 
And the tiny feet of insects
The great call of their rainbow hues
Is ready to set a fire
In time to stride in their glory
Through to summer

But
Wait
The tiny buds have yet to taste
A drop of rain
And yet to bask for at least a day
In golden heat
Precipitates
Perambulates
Perchance to ponder
Proliferates
Languid time
Wakes

Timeless

Spring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/11/2009 1:01:00 AM
wonderful write... your creativity is outstanding! love the way you ended and title is just perfect!! BRAVO :) ~ Arany
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Date: 3/10/2009 4:58:00 PM
OMG got no adjectives. Awesome alliteration, amazing words. Beginning to wonder what you are doing here. Flippin out over your writes. I see you have another one. I'm almost afraid to read it. Sorry, I am trying to be calm here. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/10/2009 1:24:00 PM
Love the title..cool....you are a talent my friend and your words paint the picture very well..well done...thanks for the love on my poems.
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Date: 3/10/2009 1:07:00 PM
Wow...this is wonderful, Colin!! Puts warm glow on this day. Had you written this before Christie's Soul of Sunshine contest....this would have been a winner for sure!! Loved it! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 3/10/2009 12:13:00 PM
Colin, your writing is always so clear. Your messages are not muddled by images, but empowered by them. Great use of illiteration and awesome structure in this poem on spring blossoms. I'm so glad you share your work on this site! Indeed, we share a kindred spirit when it comes to Native Americans, but I sense unity in other ways as well. Love, Carolyn
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