Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

"tested Friendship"

A soul has passed and gone away...
Once a bright light is now so grey...
Not the way I thought it would end...
A friendship I hoped would never bend...
Your light will shine for another will grasp...
But for now I'm better and will surely last...

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Poet Destroyer A July 22, 2010 at 12:26 PM yes Michael it is sad,,But you are showing good hope at the end of a new one,,enjoyed,..I left you a comment on your blog,,have alovely day,..p..d

Juan Paolo Galua July 22, 2010 at 12:19 AM Michael...I really like the way you cook your poetry...all is delicious...what's your secret ingredient?

Wilma Neels July 21, 2010 at 11:38 AM A write with sadness and triumph, being able to go on and face another day... ffct Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown July 21, 2010 at 11:29 AM Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Michael. Love, Carol

Constance La France July 21, 2010 at 6:48 AM It is very sad when we lose a friend, your sadness is evident in each word ~~~

Dr.Ram Mehta July 21, 2010 at 6:26 AM It is a nice write and well penned.

Sara Kendrick July 21, 2010 at 4:55 AM Sad write but has a hopeful ending..Sara