Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Test of Time

Secrets blowing in the wind

Another gift, another lift

Words whispered from the soul

Echoing in the chamber of my heart

Looking ahead to the dreams we'll have

It's what we believe in

No turning back

Chosen ----- Frozen

Lost in love

Lost in life

Wiping away all the tears

Soothing all our fears

Together our friendship

will survive the test of time

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Rightly Jennings April 3, 2015 at 1:40 PM Oh man, you're like a breath fresh. Inspiring. You can stay for supper! Rightly Jennings April 3, 2015 at 1:40 PM *Air

Bm Bm January 2, 2015 at 12:01 PM WOW, Tim. I think this is my favorite on the site thus far. Loved, loved, loved it! Dumb question though...the rating? I am assuming #1 is the best with 7 being the worst? Right? Lol. Again...very nice!

Debbie Duncan December 10, 2014 at 1:04 AM very nicely done :)

Eve Roper December 9, 2014 at 2:14 PM Tim, friendships, are so important, especially those that stand with you just like a good wife. Blessing to you my friend eve 7

Cortney Bartholomew November 19, 2014 at 6:20 AM This is so beautiful! I have read some of your poems and i just want to say your words go right through me. Your writing is amazing! thank you so much for this inspiration. God Bless! :)

Maurice Yvonne November 12, 2014 at 10:38 PM True words you speak. A warm ending.

Sebastian Aaron Baez November 12, 2014 at 3:45 PM Awesome write Tim. Feels like two poems in one. Now I'm gonna have to beat you up for your pot of gold. Sebastian Aaron Baez November 12, 2014 at 3:52 PM Not very long, maybe a second or two, after that I'm pretty sure my neck will break. Tim Smith November 12, 2014 at 3:47 PM I'm not a fighter Seby.....how long can you do a headstand?

Casarah Nance November 12, 2014 at 3:36 PM do you want to build a snowman? baby your friendship is a treasure, you are the pot of gold to my rainbow. :) xxxx Tim Smith November 12, 2014 at 5:32 PM Thanks Cas....hugs Tim

Jan Allison November 12, 2014 at 3:26 PM Such a sensitively penned emotional write Tim - I think the final 4 lines speak volumes :-) Hugs Jan x Tim Smith November 12, 2014 at 4:17 PM Thank you my dear friend...hugs Tim

BE Bailey November 12, 2014 at 3:00 PM Great piece Tim. A job well done dear friend. Hope all is well your side. Hugs "B" Tim Smith November 12, 2014 at 4:16 PM Thank you B .... hugs Tim

Gary Bateman November 12, 2014 at 2:46 PM Tim, A most wonderful poem here my friend. Every word and every verse with this write hits the target. Very Well-Done!! This one's in my FAV file for sure. Best Always, Gary Tim Smith November 12, 2014 at 4:15 PM Thank you Gary my friend...cheers

Charmaine Chircop November 12, 2014 at 2:38 PM To mine favs : )Coach and poem! Tim Smith November 12, 2014 at 4:14 PM Thank you :)

Charmaine Chircop November 12, 2014 at 2:37 PM Looking ahead to the dreams we'll.have,Its what we believe in,no turning back-I soooo love your determined heart in this poem .Together our friendship will survive the test of time.Your words bring comfort to my being that true. Soulful people still exist.Beautiful Coach!: ) Tim Smith November 12, 2014 at 4:13 PM There are still some soulful people my peach....friends should be treasured....hugs Tim