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Test of Time

Secrets blowing in the wind

Another gift, another lift

Words whispered from the soul

Echoing in the chamber of my heart

Looking ahead to the dreams we'll have

It's what we believe in

No turning back

Chosen ----- Frozen

Lost in love

Lost in life

Wiping away all the tears

Soothing all our fears

Together our friendship

will survive the test of time

Copyright © Tim Smith | Year Posted 2014

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Rightly Jennings Date: 4/3/2015 1:40:00 PM Oh man, you're like a breath fresh. Inspiring. You can stay for supper! Login to Reply Rightly Jennings Date: 4/3/2015 1:40:00 PM *Air

Bm Bm Date: 1/2/2015 12:01:00 PM WOW, Tim. I think this is my favorite on the site thus far. Loved, loved, loved it! Dumb question though...the rating? I am assuming #1 is the best with 7 being the worst? Right? Lol. Again...very nice! Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 12/10/2014 1:04:00 AM very nicely done :) Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 12/9/2014 2:14:00 PM Tim, friendships, are so important, especially those that stand with you just like a good wife. Blessing to you my friend eve 7 Login to Reply

Cortney Bartholomew Date: 11/19/2014 6:20:00 AM This is so beautiful! I have read some of your poems and i just want to say your words go right through me. Your writing is amazing! thank you so much for this inspiration. God Bless! :) Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/12/2014 10:38:00 PM True words you speak. A warm ending. Login to Reply

Sebastian Aaron Baez Date: 11/12/2014 3:45:00 PM Awesome write Tim. Feels like two poems in one. Now I'm gonna have to beat you up for your pot of gold. Login to Reply Sebastian Aaron Baez Date: 11/12/2014 3:52:00 PM Not very long, maybe a second or two, after that I'm pretty sure my neck will break. Tim Smith Date: 11/12/2014 3:47:00 PM I'm not a fighter Seby.....how long can you do a headstand?

Casarah Nance Date: 11/12/2014 3:36:00 PM do you want to build a snowman? baby your friendship is a treasure, you are the pot of gold to my rainbow. :) xxxx Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/12/2014 5:32:00 PM Thanks Cas....hugs Tim

Jan Allison Date: 11/12/2014 3:26:00 PM Such a sensitively penned emotional write Tim - I think the final 4 lines speak volumes :-) Hugs Jan x Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/12/2014 4:17:00 PM Thank you my dear friend...hugs Tim

BE Bailey Date: 11/12/2014 3:00:00 PM Great piece Tim. A job well done dear friend. Hope all is well your side. Hugs "B" Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/12/2014 4:16:00 PM Thank you B .... hugs Tim

Gary Bateman Date: 11/12/2014 2:46:00 PM Tim, A most wonderful poem here my friend. Every word and every verse with this write hits the target. Very Well-Done!! This one's in my FAV file for sure. Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/12/2014 4:15:00 PM Thank you Gary my friend...cheers

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/12/2014 2:38:00 PM To mine favs : )Coach and poem! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/12/2014 4:14:00 PM Thank you :)

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/12/2014 2:37:00 PM Looking ahead to the dreams we'll.have,Its what we believe in,no turning back-I soooo love your determined heart in this poem .Together our friendship will survive the test of time.Your words bring comfort to my being that true. Soulful people still exist.Beautiful Coach!: ) Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/12/2014 4:13:00 PM There are still some soulful people my peach....friends should be treasured....hugs Tim