Test of Time

Secrets blowing in the wind Another gift, another lift Words whispered from the soul Echoing in the chamber of my heart Looking ahead to the dreams we'll have It's what we believe in No turning back Chosen ----- Frozen Lost in love Lost in life Wiping away all the tears Soothing all our fears Together our friendship will survive the test of time

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Rightly Jennings

Date: 4/3/2015 1:40:00 PM

Oh man, you're like a breath fresh. Inspiring. You can stay for supper!

Rightly Jennings
Date: 4/3/2015 1:40:00 PM

*Air

Bm Bm

Date: 1/2/2015 12:01:00 PM

WOW, Tim. I think this is my favorite on the site thus far. Loved, loved, loved it! Dumb question though...the rating? I am assuming #1 is the best with 7 being the worst? Right? Lol. Again...very nice!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 12/10/2014 1:04:00 AM

very nicely done :)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/9/2014 2:14:00 PM

Tim, friendships, are so important, especially those that stand with you just like a good wife. Blessing to you my friend eve 7

Cortney Bartholomew

Date: 11/19/2014 6:20:00 AM

This is so beautiful! I have read some of your poems and i just want to say your words go right through me. Your writing is amazing! thank you so much for this inspiration. God Bless! :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/12/2014 10:38:00 PM

True words you speak. A warm ending.

Sebastian Aaron Baez

Date: 11/12/2014 3:45:00 PM

Awesome write Tim. Feels like two poems in one. Now I'm gonna have to beat you up for your pot of gold.

Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 11/12/2014 3:52:00 PM

Not very long, maybe a second or two, after that I'm pretty sure my neck will break.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2014 3:47:00 PM

I'm not a fighter Seby.....how long can you do a headstand?

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/12/2014 3:36:00 PM

do you want to build a snowman? baby your friendship is a treasure, you are the pot of gold to my rainbow. :) xxxx

Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2014 5:32:00 PM

Thanks Cas....hugs Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 11/12/2014 3:26:00 PM

Such a sensitively penned emotional write Tim - I think the final 4 lines speak volumes :-) Hugs Jan x

Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2014 4:17:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend...hugs Tim

BE Bailey

Date: 11/12/2014 3:00:00 PM

Great piece Tim. A job well done dear friend. Hope all is well your side. Hugs "B"

Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2014 4:16:00 PM

Thank you B .... hugs Tim

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/12/2014 2:46:00 PM

Tim, A most wonderful poem here my friend. Every word and every verse with this write hits the target. Very Well-Done!! This one's in my FAV file for sure. Best Always, Gary

Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2014 4:15:00 PM

Thank you Gary my friend...cheers

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/12/2014 2:38:00 PM

To mine favs : )Coach and poem!

Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2014 4:14:00 PM

Thank you :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/12/2014 2:37:00 PM

Looking ahead to the dreams we'll.have,Its what we believe in,no turning back-I soooo love your determined heart in this poem .Together our friendship will survive the test of time.Your words bring comfort to my being that true. Soulful people still exist.Beautiful Coach!: )

Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2014 4:13:00 PM

There are still some soulful people my peach....friends should be treasured....hugs Tim