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Test of Character

the ones who love me true, will love me still
the ones who love me not, they never will
for here is truth encapsulated rhyme....
the worth of character is shown in time

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lamoureux Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 10:05 AM
The ones who don't are missing out. Have a great day Eileen.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 7:27 AM
It appears I am drawn back to this one.
Manassian Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Thanks for visiting, Rick. You bring smiles
Gentry Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 6:04 AM
I was checking out iambic pentameter and the title caught my attention. Great wisdom in few words. I like how you did this. Am making it a Fav. A 7
Tate Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 2:32 PM
Eileen, you have captured the meaning succintly. Good job.
Manassian Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Thanks ever so much, James. Much appreciated visit.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 1:08 PM
I like and agree with Keith's comment.
Manassian Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 3:26 PM
:) I like having a double visit from you.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:44 AM
You are a winner to me! Hugs Rick.
Manassian Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 3:27 PM
and you to me, Richard....and you to me. Hugs
Tor Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 4:58 PM
So true and beautiful Eileen love this write. Also thanks for commenting on my What if write.
Manassian Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 3:27 PM
My pleasure. You gave me much to think on. :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 3:55 PM
We either meet the bill or we don't..Some become of good character and some become of vain, wild, wicked or sorry..Thanks for stopping by my page..Sara
Manassian Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Thanks for visiting, Sara. We all have our flaws...it's true.
Aaron Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 3:06 PM
Amazing...and time is the truest test of character
Manassian Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 3:29 PM
Thank you, David. It is true. Our character is tested most in situations of conflict.
Hicks Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 10:51 PM
Excellent brevity. It neatly divides the true lovers from the fakers ... character is an on-going thing, not something that's discovered, or brought to full, overnight. You've encapsulated a timeless truth, here, Eileen. Well done!
Manassian Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 3:31 PM
Thanks, Timothy. You're visits are always welcome. I'm so thrilled you're back on the soup. :)
Carter Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 9:17 PM
Succinct and weighty at the same time, Nice piece!
Manassian Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 3:32 PM
Thanks for the visit, Daniel. I appreciate it.
Bauer Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 7:10 PM
you've said so much in just 4 lines, eileen - i'm impressed!
Manassian Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Thank you dear....I tend to be verbose most of the time.....I'm glad this came across well in only four lines. :)
Smith Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Be true to yourself Eileen. We love you for who you are. Be strong like we know you can.
Manassian Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 4:32 PM
Thank you, Tim. :) You are very kind...have always been. Not a dark shadow in you. Hugs
Lawless Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 3:48 PM
well said, Eileen, well said. There is more to having character than being one.
Manassian Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 3:53 PM
;) Oh....Nice pun. I'm quite a character at times! ;) However, those who take time to know me...are usually those who find something worth staying around for. Thanks for the visit.
Chircop Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 3:15 PM
I love you still dear Sis..Big smiles. Love both your verses and that quote.I am a sucker for wuotes : )
Manassian Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 4:34 PM
Thanks. I am too...I am a collector. I collect pics, poems, and quotes. Oh...also crystal figures...and fridge magnets. ;) Thanks for the visit, dear.
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