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Terror of Blunder

Terror of Blunder Deep inside the ocean’s heart A man in black holding a bat Brain ruled by resentment Hypothalamus painted with black Trepidation took over my body As he moves towards me slowly Evil sneer I can still see clearly Despite his Prada’s large hoody Palpebral met bulbar rapidly Then tears sprints continually My voice box abandoned me My bones enervated suddenly I hear no footstep or any noise The place is hushed and so I peeked Nightmare met me, he is too near He raised the bat then jeered Meters to inch within a second From my frontal, blood drifted I feel the pain; ‘think it is my end I waited but why can’t I be dead The bat fiercely moves up and down Repeatedly reached my skin and bones I felt indignant I do not deserve one I just finished the job started by some I am terrified and so I hastily awoke I wobbled, I cried; I am terribly stuck Euthanasia, I should not have done it Every minute you’re piercing my heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 11/17/2015 10:36:00 PM
Rose :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 10/22/2015 3:25:00 AM
- Hello Rose Annie :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/21/2015 9:14:00 PM
Rose, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/21/2015 12:09:00 AM
Hi Rose, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/20/2015 2:43:00 AM
Rather dark, Rose. :-) But keep on penning. There are good ideas and solid lines in your poem. Welcome to the "Soup"! Best regards! :-) john
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