Terror of Blunder

Terror of Blunder

Deep inside the ocean’s heart
A man in black holding a bat
Brain ruled by resentment
Hypothalamus painted with black 

Trepidation took over my body
As he moves towards me slowly
Evil sneer I can still see clearly
Despite his Prada’s large hoody 

Palpebral met bulbar rapidly
Then tears sprints continually
My voice box abandoned me 
My bones enervated suddenly

I hear no footstep or any noise
The place is hushed and so I peeked 
Nightmare met me, he is too near 
He raised the bat then jeered

Meters to inch within a second
From my frontal, blood drifted
I feel the pain; ‘think it is my end
I waited but why can’t I be dead

The bat fiercely moves up and down  
Repeatedly reached my skin and bones
I felt indignant I do not deserve one
I just finished the job started by some

I am terrified and so I hastily awoke
I wobbled, I cried; I am terribly stuck
Euthanasia, I should not have done it 
Every minute you’re piercing my heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/17/2015 10:36:00 PM
Rose :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 10/22/2015 3:25:00 AM
- Hello Rose Annie :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/21/2015 9:14:00 PM
Rose, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/21/2015 12:09:00 AM
Hi Rose, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/20/2015 2:43:00 AM
Rather dark, Rose. :-) But keep on penning. There are good ideas and solid lines in your poem. Welcome to the "Soup"! Best regards! :-) john
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