Notes About The Poem

The Scream by Edvard Munch

 

Contest: When Words Speak for the Silence of Art Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Silent One

Date: 7/7/26

Terror

Painting: The Scream by Edvard Munch



my sweaty palms grip
the sides of my head
eyes wide with terror
a shrill scream rises
in my throat
my stomach is twisted
in Gordion knots
my feet are welded
to the pavement
my knees begin
to buckle
I feel thirty pairs of eyes
staring straight 
through me

suddenly my mood
dissipates
thank goodness the tiny
green garter snake
has darted into the bushes
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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 4:20 AM
Fun ending there!! Congrats. 👍
Mckeithan Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 5:24 AM
Thank you Andrea
Goldsmith Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations.... I enjoyed reading this powerful write. Great Ending...Great picture you have here. Snakes be gone... Enjoy your day writing away with your wonderful win.............
Mckeithan Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 4:21 PM
Thank you Paula. Appreciate your comments. Enjoy your writing day as well
One Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:38 PM
Clever how you turn this paining into your personal emotions... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Mckeithan Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 4:22 PM
Thank you Silent One. Great contest. When I read the specs The Scream right to mind
Onclaud Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 6:38 AM
powerful visual representation of munch's artpiece! nice to read you again!
Mckeithan Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 6:50 AM
Thanks Nette. Appreciate your comment
Smith  Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 1:02 AM
I am sure the painting really shows how people react to snakes. Lucky it was only a garter snake.
Mckeithan Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 1:18 AM
Yes it was. Thanks for reading Alison
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