Territory

Falling embers

Splintering lives and

Piercing memories

Rage begets rage.

Weeping mothers

Enraged brothers

Martyred fathers

Widowed sisters

Pushing ideologies

My way or no way

Twisted metal

Territorial markings

Of a beast.

deathfreedomlosspainphilosophyfree verse

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Poet Destroyer A

March 16, 2014 at 1:25 PM

Hi Rachel :) It was nice to see your poem featured in the poetry soups, home page this past week. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever *LINDA

Skat A

March 11, 2014 at 10:08 AM

Hi Rachel, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~

Joann Grisetti

January 20, 2013 at 1:04 PM

Welcome to PS. I enjoyed reading your poems today. About the poet thing, you are a poet if you say you are. Keep writing and sharing your thoughts and feelings with your voice. I find reading other poets will often spur me into writing a little differently, but never just copy someone's work.

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