Supraja Kannan Poet Rhyme

Territorial Fight

When two ants engaged in territorial fight;
Ant army around awaiting the result right;
And I was filming the war despite their bites

Wrestling, boxing and kung-fu, they played;
Did stunts; Like true warriors they portrayed;
Rolled on the ground, their power they displayed

I named the right one as 'Tred' ;
The left one as ' Red'
And I loved Tred as he was steady; 

I was wondering, Who would win?
Tred or red? The right one? Or the left one?
Oops! I missed their places while they were rolling on!!! 

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Victor Buhagiar October 9, 2021 at 1:26 AM Very original. Once mixed you will not discern which is which. Supraja Kannan October 9, 2021 at 6:06 AM Exactly!!! Thank you so much for stopping by...

Vijay Pandit October 8, 2021 at 10:55 AM I see them fighting but they are rushing so much you can't tell them apart. I have seen the scene you describe. Supraja Kannan October 9, 2021 at 1:08 AM Ha ha ha... Thank you so much... Glad you found it interesting...

Andrea Dietrich October 8, 2021 at 10:36 AM hmmm, an allegory here? Love this. Supraja Kannan October 9, 2021 at 1:10 AM Ha ha ha... Glad you think like that... Thank you so much for stopping by...

Paulette Calasibetta October 8, 2021 at 9:16 AM Very clever.....a treat to read. Take Care, Paulette Supraja Kannan October 9, 2021 at 1:11 AM Thank you so much Paulette... Glad you liked it...