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Territorial Fight

When two ants engaged in territorial fight; Ant army around awaiting the result right; And I was filming the war despite their bites Wrestling, boxing and kung-fu, they played; Did stunts; Like true warriors they portrayed; Rolled on the ground, their power they displayed I named the right one as 'Tred' ; The left one as ' Red' And I loved Tred as he was steady; I was wondering, Who would win? Tred or red? The right one? Or the left one? Oops! I missed their places while they were rolling on!!!

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Date: 10/9/2021 1:26:00 AM
Very original. Once mixed you will not discern which is which.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 10/9/2021 6:06:00 AM
Exactly!!! Thank you so much for stopping by...
Date: 10/8/2021 10:55:00 AM
I see them fighting but they are rushing so much you can't tell them apart. I have seen the scene you describe.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 10/9/2021 1:08:00 AM
Ha ha ha... Thank you so much... Glad you found it interesting...
Date: 10/8/2021 10:36:00 AM
hmmm, an allegory here? Love this.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 10/9/2021 1:10:00 AM
Ha ha ha... Glad you think like that... Thank you so much for stopping by...
Date: 10/8/2021 9:16:00 AM
Very clever.....a treat to read. Take Care, Paulette
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 10/9/2021 1:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Paulette... Glad you liked it...

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