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We're all environmentally aware enough to use sunscreen out in the sun: yet we abuse Nature with little care. And we reject blame for what we have done. Killing all the animals, sparing none; using nets, traps, and the range of a gun. Earth is our evolutionary home its flora and fauna affect us all, down to every last gene and chromosome. We glean the planet's bounty, claiming all; ensuring greed will be our downfall, devastating wildlife for urban sprawl. We're linked by an ecological web; cut one thread, and we diminish our worth: and the tides of fortune will start to ebb. Progress fuels our desire to leave Earth without even acknowledging our part, in the rape of the world we tore apart: but it's not too late, we just have to start. Scientists dream of terraforming Mars, yet stay silent about gas-guzzling cars.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/11/2018 8:36:00 AM
Well, I don't think Mars can support human life as we know it. My opinion only though. Sara
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Date: 9/11/2018 2:08:00 PM
Thanks Sara, you are right we would need to terraform it first, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2018 11:00:00 AM
Nicely written
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Date: 9/10/2018 12:14:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2018 10:20:00 AM
Well done Emile. Important message for sure. xomo
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Date: 9/10/2018 10:43:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2018 9:29:00 AM
An important reminder to us all! I wonder if you intended to write 'scientists' in the plural in the final line, Émile? I do like this rhyme scheme!
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Date: 9/10/2018 9:56:00 AM
Thanks Wendy, I appreciate your support and comments ... I did mean scientists, thanks for catching that my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2018 9:23:00 AM
Strong message of the need to take better care of our planet. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 9/10/2018 9:54:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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