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Urban Sonnet
Invented by:  Laura Loo. Sonnet form, with 10 syllables per line and a rhyme scheme of: ABABBB- CDCDDD- EFEFFF-GG

             

We're all environmentally aware, applying sunscreen when out in the sun, yet we abuse Nature with little care. And we reject blame for the damage done slaughtering wild animals, sparing none, using nets, traps, and the range of a gun. Earth is our evolutionary home; its flora and fauna connect us all, down to every last gene and chromosome. Gleaning the planet's bounty, we feel small, and without limits, greed marks our downfall, sacrificing wildlife for urban sprawl. We're part of an ecological web; cut one thread, and life starts to unravel; and things we thought would last forever, ebb. Man's mind fuels His desire to travel off-world, yet first, He must address His part in the rape of the world, He tore apart, it's not too late; there is still time to start. Scientists speak of terraforming Mars, and yet, say naught about gas-guzzling cars.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/11/2018 8:36:00 AM
Well, I don't think Mars can support human life as we know it. My opinion only though. Sara
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Date: 9/11/2018 2:08:00 PM
Thanks Sara, you are right we would need to terraform it first, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2018 11:00:00 AM
Nicely written
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Date: 9/10/2018 12:14:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2018 10:20:00 AM
Well done Emile. Important message for sure. xomo
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Date: 9/10/2018 10:43:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2018 9:29:00 AM
An important reminder to us all! I wonder if you intended to write 'scientists' in the plural in the final line, Émile? I do like this rhyme scheme!
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Date: 9/10/2018 9:56:00 AM
Thanks Wendy, I appreciate your support and comments ... I did mean scientists, thanks for catching that my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2018 9:23:00 AM
Strong message of the need to take better care of our planet. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 9/10/2018 9:54:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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