Terrace Envy

How I wish I had a terrace!
I’d be out there every day,
Just relaxing with my crossword,
Letting hours slip away.

I’d step out to check the weather
In the snow or sleet or rain;
Though I’d gladly risk a soaking,
I would probably refrain.

But in weather not inclement,
I’d have breakfast there outside,
With a breeze as my companion
And the sunshine as my guide.

In the afternoon or evening
There’d be sustenance and wine;
I’d survey all my surroundings
From that aerie perch of mine.

Since I live within the city,
I might lack a lovely view;
But I’m not so very greedy
That a cityscape won’t do.

When I notice other balconies
I wonder why folks choose ‘em;
For unlike the way I know I’d be,
They never ever use ‘em!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Debole Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 7:08 PM
Hi Ilene - Every poem you write is so well-thought out, creative, and clever. Enjoyed reading this one, too. (BTW - thank you for your comment about my Dena poem.) - Gail
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 6:32 PM
first of all, your title is GREAT. And how you supported the topic, your REASON for wanting the terrace was very nicely described. Was this, by chance, for any contest?
Jones Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 4:55 PM
"aerie perch of mine"..... NICE!!!
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 11:11 AM
Ilene-Great title, first of all-LOL! This is such an interesting topic to write a poem about. I love it!!! I will have to read more of your stuff later-I love people who truly think outside the box or terrace in this case :)
Holzhaus Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 9:25 AM
Nice - and good to read on my own terrace.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace