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Nette Onclaud, Poetry is in the House, 11/10/2025

Terrace

Sea in cool of evening;
course-wind and surf stirs me.
Stars open the heavens;
invited to high tea
with the Lord’s harmonics.
No better place to be.
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November 14, 2025 at 1:44 AM
Nicely penned, Congratulations
Miller Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 12:20 AM
Sounds wonderful, congratulations
George Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 8:27 PM
Well done. Congratulations, Kim.
Famuyiwa Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 12:21 PM
"Stars open the heavens". I particularly like that line. Congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 2:21 PM
Thank you Maclawrence!
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 10:51 AM
Congrats for your win. This is a great write for the terrace theme
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 12:07 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Gorelick Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 11:27 AM
No better place to be or guest to be with! Lovely
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 11:55 AM
Absolutely!
Loving Iii Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 10:36 AM
More homie. I'll have to write one my self.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 11:55 AM
Yes! Do that!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 1:54 AM
Hi Kim, such a lovely place to be. Loved it.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:24 AM
Thank you, dear one!
Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 3:02 PM
Ahhh!! Reads like a lovely place to be. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:23 AM
Thank you, Sara! Nothing like breathing in the salt sea!
Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 7:32 PM
So, so, so much better than tea at 10 - 2 - 4 with those stuffy broomstick-riders over at Buckingham Palace! Remind them that we won the war! lol.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 4:48 AM
LOL!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 5:50 PM
beautiful and a delightful contest entry. Best wishes with this entry in the contest, hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 6:10 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 5:04 PM
I’m at a lost as she’s glued to verses odes and of the sort, she’ll be the judge of this, I like it nevertheless, hope you win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 6:10 PM
Thank you, William!
Hind Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 1:03 PM
Beautiful atmosphere- sea is beautiful at night, and nice for tea time!! <3
Hind Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 3:56 PM
Oh, I didn't know that, Kim. Thanks :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 2:56 PM
The high tea metaphoric of God showing his glory :)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 11:53 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Terrace" write. "Good Luck" I did ATTIC... Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 2:56 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:32 AM
- Sounds like a fairy tale... (a little too cold on the terrace here now) ... lovely, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:57 AM
Upcoming cruise! Thanks, dear one!
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