Termites Cq

aging darken
dead ember wood 
creaking left bare
eating termites 

in colonies
hard destructive
winged eating bugs
hollow out trees


9/1/2019


Poetry Contest: Charlie-Quadku 
Sponsored by: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 6:07 PM
Nice to see what you wrote on . You picked an insect that I think would be very scary to see around one's house and then wonder what damage they might be inflicting(unseen). Congrats on the win, Eve.
La France Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 11:41 AM
Eve congratulations on your win, excellent ***
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 11:01 AM
- Congratulations on your great Haiku, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Messina Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 7:11 AM
Where the heck is the exterminator (lol) Great poetry Eve. Nicely done! Congratulations on your win. Hugs Charlie
Salehi Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 9:30 PM
you should call the Orkin man... LOL... good luck
Gupta Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 10:15 AM
Lovely photos made of just with few words ... Nice ..
Green Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 8:50 AM
Nicely done Eve. Poetic termites, who would have thought. Best wishes in the contest
Krutsinger Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 10:11 PM
I can almost see those termites running along the rotted out wood, enjoying a wonderful day of pure teamwork, Eve.
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